The sequel ?

Wow, this is absolutely incredible. The amount of detail and creativity here really stands out. I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought into everything from the character design and expressions to the overall composition and mood. It’s not just visually striking but also tells a story, which is something I really admire.

The way you’ve captured emotion, movement, and personality in your work is honestly next-level . It’s always inspiring to see creators who are so passionate about what they do. That passion really shows in every line and color choice. Whether this is part of a bigger project or just a standalone idea, it truly deserves more attention. Keep creating and sharing more. This kind of work adds so much to the creative community.

Well wow poor lyon he sacrifice was for nothing.

Now Madera vs ur will begin well hope Madera will love to dance with her decease wife.

They need itachi or Madera book but knowing ultear hope she do the right decision.

Michael Shadows, at the end of chapter 59 Gray's plan of getting Madara's Book from Zeref sounds like good Plan B. However, there are two problems, one is that Zeref probably won’t be able to cooperate with Gray to defeat Madara as he is just as selfish and cold hearted as Madara, he also doesn’t care if Madara destroys Humanity or not, as long as he gets Fairy Heart. Also in Chapter 43, Madara decoded his book to sever his life connections to Zeref. I believe that if Madara is to be stopped, then in the next Chapter, Gray, Juvia and Ultear, must first find Edolas Itachi for help and as they confront Zeref for the Books of Madara, Itachi, Natsu, Kisame, Sasori and Kakuzu. Afterwards, Once Gray, Juvia and Ultear fight Zeref from different Angles, Edolas Itachi would then cast Izanami on Zeref turning the tide of this battle. That is how Zeref would be defeated, with Edolas Itachi Casting the Izanami on him while Earthland Itachi uses his Genjutsu to force Zeref, how to sever the life connections to Zeref and stop Madara. Also with Mavis using Fairy Heart, the deceased characters on Ishgar’s side will be given a second chance.

Now that's one hell of a chapter. I don't know where to start. :)
Besides saying that Ultear has finally unlocked her Mangekyo Sharingan, using two her Mangekyo abilities, including her own Susanoo.

And I totally like Ultear's Mangekyo Sharingan abilities; Amatsu-Mikaboshi, a Genjutsu that has similar ability to Shisui's Kotoamatsukami, and she successfully freed Ur from control, and her Kuninotokotachi allows her to stop time.

And Lyon got killed by Madara, this is war, it is unavoidable that people from both sides will die, even very known support characters, including the defenseless civilians that are on Ishgar.

Also, Gray is really powerful in his Devil Force, especially having a third eye on his forehead. You truly made Devil Slayer Magic being very remarkable in your story.

Good

Good chapter

Good chapter kinda hope you chsnge your mind abour naruto villians

Good chapter

Good chapter kinda bummed you nerfed him with illness

Good chapter

Make him OP itachi was him. Obito literally waited to go after sasuke because he was scared of itschi. Danzo was scared of itachi. Hes him. Good chap

Interesting first chapter

Good chapter. Kind of messed up that you labelled Madara as responible for Lyon's death. Everybody there (literally EVERYBODY THERE) told him not do it. It'd be funny if in future chapters you subtlely changed it to "Lyon Vastia (killed by Lyon Vastiaor "Lyon Vastia (killed by his own stupidity)"

A good-ish fanfiction, but could have been much better without the Itachi wank. Not to be rude, but the author feels like an Itachi fanboy from Comicvine.