I like the premise, not so much the execution at the moment

i can totally see ben just outrigth going full rage mode and going alien x just to teleport aurorua back to her home and lock glace somewhere were he wil never escape

when youll have a MC who can bend reality at will,it becomes hard to make a justified challange for him

we need more necrofriggian babies fanfics here

Ooof course it was This Day Aria. Lmao.

Suprised she was horrified. Necrofriggian babies are fucking adourable.

Wonderful story!

Welp this is pretty much cliche

I really liked the perspective in this. It's irrational and pretty flawled but that's what makes them human. I usually have trouble predicting behaivours like this, it's like a breath of fresh air to me to read this.

It will be rarely portrayed in a fic. Usually every character thinks the same or has the same ideology but here everything is mixed even if it's not perfection. It is good my man you're doing a good work and if you keep writing and focusing on your strengths you'll be able to produce very good works.

This is hilarious my only critique is how stupid of a statement Gwen made or how azmuth seemed to be pretty irrational. Ben saying he's a hero makes a lot of sense, I don't know about Gwen completely but azmuth shou have akwnoleged it. Characters are of.

Still I was cacling through the fic.
"Mom, Dad, seriously!" Ben cut in. "I didn't sleep with an alien!"
This was funny as hell along with other stuff.

Ben can still be a full time hero and parent.

OHHH MY GOD THE WAY I ADORE THIS

One of the best story's ever!

LOVE IT! I can't help grinning every time Ben act motherly.

Man I love Max

Lol k let's get into this