Reviews for The Frost Queen
Guest chapter 14 . 8/15
Please write a sequel
Antonio61384 chapter 14 . 11/30/2022
Absolutely adorable and very well written.
KvAT chapter 3 . 11/19/2022
Be careful Ben, understanding Orwell's 1984 is more beneficial than you might think, especially if your daughter is watching My Little Pony.
DragonB0b chapter 14 . 7/20/2022
Honestly, I love how Ben is in this fic. Though I wish he had talked to the school about his motherhood, because it would be both funny, and the school likely would have made arrangements for Ben. Also the ending, I just imagine his children being confused because they sense two parents, and that's what took them so long.

As one commenter said, if they took much longer to find Aurora, Ben would bring out Alien X, and fix it that way. Regardless of what the other heads thought.
Zealot07 chapter 2 . 5/19/2022
I like the premise, not so much the execution at the moment
Jpx0999 chapter 13 . 4/24/2022
i can totally see ben just outrigth going full rage mode and going alien x just to teleport aurorua back to her home and lock glace somewhere were he wil never escape

when youll have a MC who can bend reality at will,it becomes hard to make a justified challange for him
Jpx0999 chapter 14 . 4/24/2022
we need more necrofriggian babies fanfics here
cc chapter 10 . 4/4/2022
Ooof course it was This Day Aria. Lmao.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2022
Suprised she was horrified. Necrofriggian babies are fucking adourable.
Moss chapter 14 . 3/12/2022
Wonderful story!
Gg chapter 11 . 2/13/2022
Welp this is pretty much cliche
Gg chapter 8 . 2/13/2022
I really liked the perspective in this. It's irrational and pretty flawled but that's what makes them human. I usually have trouble predicting behaivours like this, it's like a breath of fresh air to me to read this.

It will be rarely portrayed in a fic. Usually every character thinks the same or has the same ideology but here everything is mixed even if it's not perfection. It is good my man you're doing a good work and if you keep writing and focusing on your strengths you'll be able to produce very good works.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/13/2022
This is hilarious my only critique is how stupid of a statement Gwen made or how azmuth seemed to be pretty irrational. Ben saying he's a hero makes a lot of sense, I don't know about Gwen completely but azmuth shou have akwnoleged it. Characters are of.

Still I was cacling through the fic.
"Mom, Dad, seriously!" Ben cut in. "I didn't sleep with an alien!"
This was funny as hell along with other stuff.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/5/2021
Ben can still be a full time hero and parent.
kattythingz chapter 14 . 12/5/2021
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