Reviews for The Frost Queen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like the premise, not so much the execution at the moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can totally see ben just outrigth going full rage mode and going alien x just to teleport aurorua back to her home and lock glace somewhere were he wil never escape when youll have a MC who can bend reality at will,it becomes hard to make a justified challange for him |
![]() ![]() ![]() we need more necrofriggian babies fanfics here |
![]() ![]() Ooof course it was This Day Aria. Lmao. |
![]() ![]() Suprised she was horrified. Necrofriggian babies are fucking adourable. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() Welp this is pretty much cliche |
![]() ![]() I really liked the perspective in this. It's irrational and pretty flawled but that's what makes them human. I usually have trouble predicting behaivours like this, it's like a breath of fresh air to me to read this. It will be rarely portrayed in a fic. Usually every character thinks the same or has the same ideology but here everything is mixed even if it's not perfection. It is good my man you're doing a good work and if you keep writing and focusing on your strengths you'll be able to produce very good works. |
![]() ![]() This is hilarious my only critique is how stupid of a statement Gwen made or how azmuth seemed to be pretty irrational. Ben saying he's a hero makes a lot of sense, I don't know about Gwen completely but azmuth shou have akwnoleged it. Characters are of. Still I was cacling through the fic. "Mom, Dad, seriously!" Ben cut in. "I didn't sleep with an alien!" This was funny as hell along with other stuff. |
![]() ![]() Ben can still be a full time hero and parent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHH MY GOD THE WAY I ADORE THIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best story's ever! |
![]() ![]() LOVE IT! I can't help grinning every time Ben act motherly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I love Max |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol k let's get into this |