Reviews for The Frost Queen |
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![]() ![]() i found this story a week ago and just finished it tonight and oml that was so good and cute and funny it actually felt like i was watching an episode haha i havent visited ff. net in literal years but the moth babies content in other websites is so little and always unfinished so im truly happy there are stories like this! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH FICS OF BENS KIDS |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing I never understood, why would Ben, Gwen or any alien person study in a human school? If not just maintaining a disguise is useless or unnecessary, Ben could drop out of school and study for some material that Azhmuth gives, I doubt any education on earth can compare to what he can receive from space. |
![]() ![]() Please write a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely adorable and very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Be careful Ben, understanding Orwell's 1984 is more beneficial than you might think, especially if your daughter is watching My Little Pony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I love how Ben is in this fic. Though I wish he had talked to the school about his motherhood, because it would be both funny, and the school likely would have made arrangements for Ben. Also the ending, I just imagine his children being confused because they sense two parents, and that's what took them so long. As one commenter said, if they took much longer to find Aurora, Ben would bring out Alien X, and fix it that way. Regardless of what the other heads thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the premise, not so much the execution at the moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can totally see ben just outrigth going full rage mode and going alien x just to teleport aurorua back to her home and lock glace somewhere were he wil never escape when youll have a MC who can bend reality at will,it becomes hard to make a justified challange for him |
![]() ![]() ![]() we need more necrofriggian babies fanfics here |
![]() ![]() Ooof course it was This Day Aria. Lmao. |
![]() ![]() Suprised she was horrified. Necrofriggian babies are fucking adourable. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() Welp this is pretty much cliche |
![]() ![]() I really liked the perspective in this. It's irrational and pretty flawled but that's what makes them human. I usually have trouble predicting behaivours like this, it's like a breath of fresh air to me to read this. It will be rarely portrayed in a fic. Usually every character thinks the same or has the same ideology but here everything is mixed even if it's not perfection. It is good my man you're doing a good work and if you keep writing and focusing on your strengths you'll be able to produce very good works. |