Reviews for The Frost Queen
Mebreb chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
While I greatly enjoy this story in general and applaud the use of a subject so problematic as slavery in such a progressive age (i.e., times of humans getting used to aliens, a topic which also brings racism to the table), what bothers me is that the only aliens being trapped are aliens recognizable as species from the Omnitrix. It's not really an issue of originality so much as suspension of disbelief. You could've used any aliens, any at all from the entire series, especially any of the cameo aliens from Undertown. And yet, in an almost unbelievable coincidence, they're ALL from the Omnitrix. I honestly think this is something inherent in fanfictions: a lack of creative differentiation in its material from its source. In other words, I think if a Ben 10 fanfiction were to use any type of alien at all outside of the canon characters, that alien is more than likely to be a species already introduced in canon. It might just be me who's bothered by it, but it's still an unshakable notice in the back of my mind that I can't help but think is true and rant endlessly about in fanfiction comment sections like this one.
Actually, did Llewelynn intentionally do this to capture his audience's attention? Did he try to mooch off Ben's success by capturing his alien's? The more I think about it, the more possible it could be. And the more I think about it, the more clever it seems to me as opposed to just being a fanfiction cliché. The introduction of Llewelynn was pretty inventive, I'll admit that, and I also can't wait to see who the traitor is, so I ask of you to keep up the good work despite what might just be the pretentious, "oh-no-this-isn't-original-do-something" part of my brain. And, eventually (if this gets enough other commenters), other pretentious f**ks.
Diyce chapter 4 . 8/30/2017
Interested in seeing more of everyone's interactions, and the impact his daughter has on Ben's character.
AnonymousNavi chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
How precious! I love the necrofriggian babies! So happy to see them and so happy Ben and co were able to save all the aliens from the carnival. :D
Reading Pixie chapter 4 . 7/12/2017
Bring BJ her big brother lol live it
JimmyHall24 chapter 4 . 7/5/2017
I shall favorite this so hard.
JimmyHall24 chapter 2 . 7/5/2017
I want to give Aurora a big hug like oh my god.
JimmyHall24 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Well isn't this awkward. xD
Kyuukunchan chapter 4 . 7/3/2017
This is so cute so far! Can't wait for more
Energizing Entry chapter 4 . 7/1/2017
So cute more please XD
calvinator09 chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
I love this chapter and I wouldn't mind seeing Ben as big chill trying to phase though something while wearing clothes mostly since I doubt there's another incident of that having been recorded
Cashagon chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
Aurora is adorable! So cute! But the poor baby... Did she over heat in the car? Just how long was she in there? Ben has got a lot to learn about child care. Good thing he's a quick learner. Or at least learning from this experience... And now they know that whoever is selling aliens is female. A clue! Yeah!

Cash is out. Peace!
Mr. Haziq chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
I'm gonna guess Ben's going to have to turn into Big Chill to cool her off 'cause young Necrofriggians stay in cold places until their body starts developing their ice powers?
Yana5 chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
awww great update. thank you
Storygirl000 chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
Welcome to the brony community, Ben. Please wipe your feet and leave your sanity at the door.
XxXNightcoreQueenXxX chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
if only the plummers had some sort of kindergarten.
Looks like granma and granpa has to step in plus some other babysitters from time to time.
MLP, can't help but love it. you can convert villains with that show.

it was a delight to read this chapter 3
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