|Reviews for Mushoku Tensei - Re:Vengeance|
| ShinRainhawk chapter 10 . 8/8/2020
who care about minor oc story?
game me rudy story
not Paul or minor character
| FateBurn chapter 12 . 8/3/2020
Great chapter, like always
| FateBurn chapter 11 . 7/27/2020
| OneAboveKami chapter 2 . 7/27/2020
My only complaint is that he actually wants to thank the mysterious being?
I would have thought he'd be more cynical and try to think why that mysterious being gave him a second chance. And contingency plans to kill him too if the need arises.
Also he already went through this life once. Why is he acting like a retard?
First thing he should have done is cry like a real baby.
And instead of using Water ball which actually leaves evidence, with his more than 60 years of experience could he not have used a better magic to waste mana?
In fact I would think that instead of using water ball. A magic like that releases pure mana would have been much better. Or something like levitation magic which would waste mana continuously, leave no evidence and cause no damage unless you drop the thing you're levitating.
But the height doesn't matter anyway so levitating something 1 cm above the surface would do.
I would say his 60 years is a waste if he can't figure out something like that.
| borbos chapter 10 . 7/12/2020
story about mc without fucking mc
| FateBurn chapter 10 . 6/21/2020
| kazekitsune666 chapter 10 . 6/15/2020
I'm sorry to say that i'm quickly loosing interest in your story. Beginning was quite nice, but god you used as plot device is never mentioned again. In Rudeus extreme hatred of human god, it seems impossible that he would trust some unknown god on the first meeting. Besides that rest of chapters 1-4 was nice. Than 5 happened. I tried but i just don't care about this characters. Its not an original fiction and those are mob characters. So i read half of 5.1 and stopped reading since. I was quite excited about chapter 6 but this whole chapter is about Paul, and suddenly i no longer care. Ill try few more chapters but this fic seams to have a lot of wool and not a lot of meat. Good luck to you.
| CurryKing chapter 1 . 6/14/2020
Wow, it's back from the dead. Hurray! Time to reread from the start. Thanks for another chapter Kaocakeman.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
The most beautiful fanfic I've ever read. It satisfied the yearning i had for future rudy to live happy again. I've only read the first chapter, but beautifully written and I've been beautifully touched by the interactions with the past and elements of self realization.
| TheSilverEagle22 chapter 7 . 4/13/2019
Overall as of date, the story started off really strong. Once it was time for the delivery arc, things started getting messy. It felt as if two different stories were being put into one. Chapter 5.5 really feels too long to be delivered in one grand chunk.
| TheSilverEagle22 chapter 5 . 4/13/2019
The amount of fighting in this chapter was too high relative to the amount of plot. That said, it was still a pretty okay chapter.
| Caincrux chapter 4 . 2/12/2019
Wow, not even five chapters and the MC is already dumped
| Caincrux chapter 3 . 2/12/2019
Wow, cuckold right off the bat
| Caincrux chapter 2 . 2/12/2019
What a let down. After that epic ch1 you drop down to useless theory
| Caincrux chapter 1 . 2/12/2019
God of XXXX. God of Porn? Oh wow, this must have some epic harem.