Reviews for TSSD Prequel : A new world, A new chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite stories and one of the only femHarry stories that I'll read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Btw, thanks for all the trubble of rewriting this story! Love it! Second read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know what you went thru, i have had a lot of pc’s crash and break down and lost all info on them. Hope you have a good day! |
![]() ![]() Aw, I honestly love this and I hope you continue to update. I love seeing all these powerful shinobi being absolutely floored about everything magical. Not that I blame them. Magic defies logic and is capable of making the impossible possible with a simple flick of a wand (or in our beloved Hari Hime's case, a flick of a finger). Ahh, I just need to see Kashi's reaction to Hime's zoo! Demiguises, Nifflers, Occamys, Mooncalfs, Hippogriffs! There's so many amazing magical creatures, and I'm sure chaos and hilarity will ensue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() still hope you come continue this one day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is amazing, I hope this story continued |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally reading your prequel, it was a fun reading and sincerely hope you're still alive to read mine and everyone's review, then eventually continue this series before our actual demise, after all every seconds passed is precious |
![]() ![]() Loosing all your work is the second biggest reason I don't actually write... Other than the smallest stuff, it's just not worth it to me. |
![]() ![]() I don't understand why she has to tell the Hokage everything and make an unbreakable vow at that. Isnt that too hasty? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Them getting a bit closer makes me think: she hasn't met his summons yet and they would totally love her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Christmas Eve is the 24th, Christmas is always the 25th. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Hope you can finish it. ️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup. Loved the rest of it. Chapter 2 just has a lot more mistakes then normal. Thanks for writing and sharing this with us. I can only hope that you have the time and inspiration to write more again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is killing me and I’m hoping it’s just this chapter… I’ve read 2 of your other stories and I don’t remember noticing any mistakes. I was too distracted when I was listening to the first chapter of this story and the first half of this second chapter, but somewhere about halfway down I’m now noticing so many spelling/grammar mistakes. Most of the time the word is spelt right and close enough to what you wanted to say that it’s understandable. It’s just getting very jarring because it’s now happening so often. Like the difference between they/them/their. I’m not quitting the story though. I really do like it. The mistakes are just becoming a bit jarring because they are occurring so often. Or maybe I was too distracted to notice them when I first started this story. |