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![]() ![]() ![]() Last FIVE? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear god |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story just wished it was longer. I would have liked to see Harry's reaction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are this don't have sequel ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't like the way you used *this* instead of italics, *this* looks unprofessional and a bit amateur. Other than that, very enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute :) loved it |
![]() ![]() Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() Okay, so I thought this was so good. I like how you kept what it was till the end, it was kind of climatic. I really like your writing style, it is very much like my own. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really short, but I enjoyed it very much. A story doesn't have to be long to be good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good, nice little onshot. you should try writting a whole harry draco Mpreg fanfic, i'de like to see how it turns out. oh, well, just wanted to say nice story, bye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() -squeals- Haha!~ -AMLF |
![]() ![]() Aww. That was just adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thehehe! That was funny! Loved it! Loved the end and the part with the toothpaste! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good writing i do say but there wasnt anything in it... u could have at least told us what it said... jees so yea... some more of this would be nice.. -Hizeme- |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! A genius piece of work! :D So cute, too! |