Reviews for The Phoenix Travel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when will this be updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() Uwu he twansfowms aws ahwuwuman going. In the past does he? Are you an actual idiot? Oh wait stupid question, you are. There aren’t many stories with Harry going in the fucking past as only a Phoenix but always him going back in fuckin time as a human, you just hopped on the cancerous semen train known as cliche bullshit. |
![]() ![]() I was hoping for Harry to stay an overpowered Phoenix... But noooo. Another idiot thought. Oh hey lets do what everyone else does and bore the readers with the same fucking shit a thousand times over? That sounds pretty fuckingfantastic? Riiiiiiiiiiiiiigggghhhhht. Well fuck you asshole. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue, please? Want to find out what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your story soon please I absolutely loved it and hope you continue it please please pretty please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I just imagined this little scenario as harry told them that he made horcruxes "He made Horcruxes" *gasp* "He didn't!" Euphemism said. "He did" harry nodded seriously . "Ohhhhh shit just got real" Fleamont said P.s James parents are named Charles and Doria |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more this story rocks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should try to change Severus life also. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it please write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() James didn't get to play with harry |
![]() ![]() Omg he meets his parents and grandparents, please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello Mr author, I am very gladly reading your story. I can only hope it gets even better in the future. That betterment will only happen if you do not forget to add dots at the end of your sentences! Keep developing your ideas, and keep going! (cool story bro) |