Its a shame this story is dead.

I've followed, but it's a worthless hope that cost a button press.

Have to just say, Love the goblin examination machine. Too many authors just have a lazy handwave of a magical parchment. Love the Dahlesque crazy contraption.

Ok, for quoting Heinlein and calling him a wise man, you get Favorited. Because you earned it.

First time for everything. I have never liked Skeeter but your story premise intrigued me. I have loved every minute of it. thank you for sharing.

Its been well over 5 years but damn this story was good.

I'm thinking Sirius. Or Regulas. Looking forward to what's next! Great job but curious as to why you keep insulting the characters?

This is one of the best fics that develop Rita, even a relationship could form many years after Harry has more experience, PLEASE! Any hero who wants to continue or do something similar with this very original work?...

All right I don’t understand how old is this character?
The whole tackling scene sounds like something you would do for someone under the age of eight.

ABANDONED! - I really enjoyed the story. it's a shame you abandoned it. I keep coming back to see if you've added a new chapter, but I've all I get is disappointed.

A continuation to my chapter 5 comment...
It's a well known fact that once puberty STRIKES, a BOY jumps head first into his DEFAULT CONDITION of (BONE HARD-BRAIN DEAD!) Does that constitute informed CONSENT?
We guess that it depends on the individual. Is wanting physical pleasure not considered informed consent? Not by the hypocrites in charge, anyway.

As for the females, I have no idea how they work. They are indeed another incomprehensible species from another planet, from a galaxy and dimension far, far away! Only they MAY know how they tick.

No one knows how they really work, and no one ever created a manual for that species.
I speak only for the Human male from personal experience. (grins)
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Rita and her pedo intensions are a bit disturbing. I know as well as most people know that this is far more common than most people will ever admit to, but hearing, reading or seeing it is disturbing. Society says this is bad, and who really knows if it is all that bad or not.

I'm more inclined to think CONSENT is where the line should be drawn, but there's always an age consideration as well. Everyone has a different opinion on where that line should be drawn as well. We all know that teenagers are the most sexually active from 12-24 years old, then it starts to drop off.

Funny isn't it that Society prohibits sexual activity for teens, the most sexually active part of their lives. What's a boy or girl to do when it is prohibited by the hypocrites in charge of everything?
Ignore them, of course, and do whatever the hell they please anyway.
Hypocrites, all of them old prouds, parents, politicians, and lawmakers!
"Do as they say, not as they do!" That's always their mantra!
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A rather interesting story and one with a Rita plot that I've not seen before. It's a shame it seems to be abandoned, as so many other good story starts are also abandoned.

Every once in a while I come back and read this all over again and I still find it oddly humorous. Please don't let this one die. This is damn near the only Rita story out there that is actually engaging and not just a bashing story.

I think you're going overboard with all the name substitutions. They are needed to break the repeatedness of the text, but the names you chose seem... Weird? Insulting to the subject? Almost like you just discovered British English and want to use as many British words as possible? I don't know.

You need to continue this. I’m surprised at how good it is.