Reviews for War for Peace
techtsumi chapter 3 . 8/15
You know.. I just read this on whim after looking for a good crossover fanfic with azula pairing. Slowly but surely this story kinda grows on me, Xisheng slowly grows on me. It's so comical to imagine a royal guard standing akwardly and confused beside the table in a room with a noble girl and the one and only princess azula inviting him for supper.
jessetimm5491 chapter 13 . 8/14
i'm annoyed that no one is taking out sokka
axel100 chapter 28 . 8/13
A lot to comment on but I'll stick with one thing. There would be a political dimension to Azulas future marriage. Would Ozai allow her to choose her own husband? Azulon had frced him to marry Ursa after all. As future Firelord, Azula would have even more constraints. Promising his daughters hand to a politcal ally rather than letting her choose Gohan is worryin possibility that. I hope you will address in future chapters.
MDNick chapter 28 . 8/11
I've been where u been mate, keep on keeping on.
RecklessBaka chapter 28 . 8/8
I'm so sorry about your job, man. I wish I could do more, but my Patreon contribution is all I can muster in this economy. I pray you get back on your feet.

In regards to the chapter, I'm gonna keep it short(er) than usual as I don't have much time.

I love Azula's confidence in her declaration and follow up. She knows what she wants and is lasering in to get it. No excuses, no beating around the bush, no hesitation. Such a thing is a shock to Ty Lee and Mai.

I feel for Ty Lee. Trying so hard to look out for others, while also not wanting to lose Xisheng. Poor girl. She doesn't want her friends to feel heart-broken, but at the same time all is fair in love and war. Romance is very much a winner take all (unless harem, fingers crossed). Azula's on the offensive and Mai has retreated. With all this in the air, I'm happy she's not wallowing in regret on her hesitation with Xisheng and actually went to him for intimacy. Spicy stuff!

And POOR MAI. Goddamn. I can feel her heart-break in this chapter. The one guy she started to fall in love with is now being pounced on by an insurmountable rival. You can really feel her logical side kicking in, trying to explain with why the Xisheng romance will never happen. It's so sad how she's trying to cope with it.

Goddamn, what a chapter.
HelloEver22 chapter 28 . 8/7
And now the relationships truly begin, lets see how it goes!
danielsnow chapter 28 . 8/7
yooo someone has started to post this story on webnovel!
Sebas602 chapter 28 . 8/7
Well...it was obvious that there was going to be a conflict between Azula, Ty Lee and Mai due to Azula's words regarding wanting to marry Xisheng, even Mai felt crestfallen because of that and although Ty Lee tried to encourage her not to gave up, she decided not to continue...although I think that could change for later...

It was a surprise to see how Xinsheng is aware that the 3 girls are in love with him...and how he seeks to find a solution about it.

The fact that he defended Azula from the general's words was a good thing on his part, although we have to see how things develop later.

...I didn't expect an attack on Xinsheng, just as I didn't expect that Shinji would die by sacrificing himself to save Xinsheng...it honestly left a sour taste in my mouth because Shinji was loyal to be almost the same age.

Now Xinsheng, the truth is I also noticed it as a gesture to help him forget and put all his problems aside for a while...

The truth is that it didn't bother me that it was an implication of a sex scene and not the scene itself, it is your decision as the author if you decide to write 18 scenes, scenes that give a nod to what will happen are sufficient in my opinion, on the other hand If you want to write the scenes I don't see a problem.

100000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

It was a great chapter! The wait was totally worth it!

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

Don't worry about how long it takes, you also have your life and we understand it, take the time you need, go at your own pace.

I wish you the best and keep going!

Take care of yourself!

Bye!
Deoxis chapter 28 . 8/7
my boy shin just got killed for a lil powerup and a handy, nice. cant blame no one tho a handy's a handy
PaladinKaladin chapter 28 . 8/6
Love this story! Hope everything goes well so you release the next one soon!
GraysonWolfe68 chapter 28 . 8/6
You know, I was just thinking a couple dozen paragraphs ahead that my poor boy was raising a lot of death flags. Poor boy. Glad to see you back in action, and hope all goes well for you in the future!
Max1212 chapter 28 . 8/5
Welcome back!
To be honest, I am glad that this chapter has paid attention to the relationship between the main character and his future harem) And I did not expect such a move from Ty Lee but it is welcome and I hope that the future hot scenes will be full of details)
I look forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
I can see the harem forming for Xinsheng. Azula will be his primary wife, while Ty Lee and Mai are secondary consorts. In the world of ATLA, there’s no stated rule that forbids polygamy so I can see the harem ending happening in this story. Keep up the good work
Guest chapter 28 . 8/5
As ever love seeing this get a new chapter

Also sorry to hear things have been rough for you the past few months for whatever that’s worth

For the chapter itself as ever loved it

In regards to the three lovely ladies I am curious who will be the first to put forward the notion that they all just end up happy with Xisheng

Glad that his old general arrived with reinforcements to help out

But man did not expect Shinji to bite the bullet rip to him it also completely went over my head that his sister On Ji was the On Ji from the show but yeah like I said him dying wasn’t something I expected

Xisheng and Ty Lee having their first intimate couplings to put a term to it was a nice way to end the chapter

Do hope we get explicit sex scenes in the future at some point

Needless to say do hope the sex helps Xisheng feel a lot less stressed in the morning
evilstatistic19 chapter 28 . 8/5
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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