this was a great chapter. I'm so happy the mc finally lost his virginity. Hopefully, the mc wont hide away from these things anymore. i was beginning to lose hope in the mc.

the mc has been in the army for years, he should be used to death of his comrades by now, but one guy dies protecting him, and he locks himself in his room all depressed. the mc should be cold and stoic to death, especially since he's a commander now. hes a leader now he cant be showing such weakness. That's how you lose respect. the mc should also relize his position and not get to close to his soldiers, as a commander, its important that you keep a certain level of awe and respect and becoming friends with your subordinates is how you lose that

im so excited to see the names i came up with here! its nice to see the physical intimacy progress! I think mei will amt to try it next once she thinks about finally getting her happily ever after. Sucks that shinji died like dog.

Oh my goodness. Shinji!

And this chapter had so much relationship progress! The love quadrangle is real.

Idk how you did it but you actually made the harem like able. Most harems are done so terribly, I just plain out ignore the fic.I’m glad you just hinted at smut, i personally just skip smut. It just not my thing.

Great chapter, will admit was hoping for a sex scene with Ty Lee, but like you said probably not the best context to include one given what happened, plus the chapter was already quite lengthy already, would like to see some in future chapters though.

Looking forward to Azula and Mai reactions to Ty Lee getting a head of them, I'm still hoping for a harem ending, Azula might not like sharing but if it's just Mai and Ty Lee I could see her begrudgingly allowing it, wouldn't be the first time that Royalty or Nobility permitted multiple partners.

Damn she did a Roxy...

Finally something juicy oh I can't wait to see Mai and Azulas responses to this especially Azulas.

gran capitulo, espero con ansias el siguiente, tambien espero ver pronto al equipo avatar y su reaccion ante la destruccion de la muralla.

I’m so glad to see that this story isn’t abandoned, one of the works I look forward to seeing updated everyday. I hope you get better soon.

The harem has developed so organically i dont want to lose, hope everyone gets that happy ending and i understand man life gets you sometimes. There a ton of writers i want to support so that they continue giving us great stories but in the same boat of no finances to do so, if it changes in the future will try to help

As always, this has been a great chapter in this incredible story. A month ago I found myself looking for ATLA fanfics until I found this work with which I was so fascinated that I dedicated myself to reading all the chapters in a row even if that meant staying up late and I don't regret it since this has been the best Avatar fanfic that I read.

I really hope that our four protagonists can be happy, the relationships that Xisheng has with Azula, Mai and Ty Lee have been carried out in such a way that in my opinion none of them deserve to lose.

Anyway this would be all I have to say for the moment, I really have more comments and observations that I would like to write about this story but there would be so many that I wouldn't know how to express them correctly. I can only wish you the best to be able to overcome difficult situations and I hope it goes well for you.

I'm your fan.

Man, I'm normally a firm hater of harems, since they always feel unnatural. But goddammit I want everyone to be happy here, I don't want none of our 4 here to be unhappy at the end of this. Also while I do pray for some "spicy scenes" instead of hints, I'm happy with either. Amazing chapter as always keep up the great work! And I hope you can find a new job to support your family!

well i wondered when the Dai Li were going to make a move i do wonder if Long Feng will cut a deal with Azula like he did in canon once he sees how fucked Ba Sing Se is i also wonder how this will effect the whole "there is no war in Ba Sing Se" policy kind of hard to maintain when the enemy is camped in your living room and im still hoping Xisheng gets the harem ending

Damn it Ty lee, this is fine, I'm just gonna assume that you're going for a poly route and hope I don't get too disappointed if it doesn't happen lol. Azula is still number one, I don't care if Ty Lee got a taste of the goods first, Azula will get her moment. I hope your IRL situation improves so that you can work on the story more, I sound pretty selfish when I say it like that but I can't help it because I need more of this story, it always makes my day better whenever I see a new chapter for this story drop.

Great job on this chapter. Looks like the Dai Lee has arrived.