Awesome!

Completed chapter 16.
Couldn't handle Hermione being shipped with Harry after her verbal attack.
So, I skipped to the end.
The war-form is interesting.
I like how you handled Dumbledore's failure to unite the Hallows.
Voldemort living forever without magic is poetic justice.
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Just can't respect Hermione getting the Happily Ever After.
Her behavior was unacceptable.
I love lunar harmony, but not on this occasion.
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Still, well written.
Thanks for sharing your time and talent.

Nope!
I could forgive her, but we would NEVER be friends again.
Friendly? Yes.
But I would never be able to trust her again.
She has proven she will attack me.
She can blame any character flaw or hormones.
It doesn't matter.
She has been weighed and found wanting.

Your Dumbledore is one of the worst.
He is as bad as Umbridge.

I hope he comes to a very sticky end.

Dobby is a menace!

I think you left one out of the last Omakes...

Harry took their magic, then decided that they were so alike they should be always together...after a bit of tinkering with magic he melded them together to where Albus was the left side of the body, but it was Voldemort's body, and Voldemort was the right side of the body, but it was Albus' body. Since they could never cooperate they would never be able to do much of anything due to the lack of coordination. On a side note, the conjunction also resulted in an almost continuous slap fest between two drama queens.

Snape, eaten by a potion ingredient...

You must be cursed with adhd and multiple personalities. Your story while good started jumping ALL over the place. The entire mood you were trying to set has been washed away. I cant figure out where the story starts ends picks back up or what. Kinda comes off deranged. I hope you get the help you need.

The Ministry is so going to get it when Umbitch harms one of Harry's friends. I wonder if there will be enough of Umbitch to identify?

What about the Basilisk carcass and the Goblins?

If Harry lets Albus get his hands on The Sword there is no telling what he will do with it. I am already in fear of him having The Stone and The Wand.

Where does the power go that is syphoned out of Harry by the wards?

Crap, I wonder how long before Albus tries to reclaim the cloak so he can be MoD?

stupid Neville. Harry has multiple people out to kill him.

Albus seems to be a Dark Lord in hiding.

I hope that Magic decides those that have betrayed should be punished.