|Reviews for Less Than Perfect|
| Goddessnmb1 chapter 5 . 2/17/2003
Hmm, intriguing. Recall that NC-17 stuff can't be posted at FFnet though. I dont know whether this is on Whispers, the WIKTT archive, but if it gets to the point where FFnet wont have it,thats always a good spot. The diary entry at the beginning seems a little melodramtic, but since the rest of it doesnt seem to be going down the endless self-pity route, its all good. Nice beginning, and I hope you write more.
| Dragon3 star chapter 1 . 2/16/2003
Good first chapter! Please post the next one soon!
| Ann Miller chapter 1 . 2/16/2003
This is an interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you are going with this. One little bit of friendly critism though, try making chapters a little longer. :)