Wow, very nice! Tastefully done, just how I like it :D (since I'm more "fade to the black" type) This was obviously more graphic, but certainly not overdone. I enjoyed it :)

Great job consistently exploring their characterization throughout a sex scene.

That was incredibly hot and beautiful! I'm loving the main story, too. I'm so sad to see that I'm almost done with it :(

Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us.

Absolutely beautiful scene and so well written. Bravo!

the part asking her if she forgot the team she should be rooting for was hysterical! haha. I loved that.
and sweet pain... *moan* so good!

I love this story, hope you keep writing about their falling in love, I can also see a baby in their future because she makes him mortal.
Patti

Soooo glad I didn't skip this part! I love how deeply you went into the characters' heads, pinpointing their sensitivities and insecurities. It made this chapter all the more beautiful and real. You did such a nice job on this scene, and the larger fic as well. Thank you for sharing your work.

~Cass

So hot and beautiful! Thank you for this!

This was amazing! Loved this great job man

That was a wonderful scene between them. But since its m-rated, it really should be put in that section as well (not k) :o)

This was so cute ! Very in character and I'm glad you explored Chloe's sexuality. Also finally someone who mentionned protection !

Finally :-)

I don't think the 'protection' works... guess your next fic will be about baby lucifer

WOW! That was some great love making between those two. It couldn't get any better. I could almost hear them moaning out loud while I was reading this chapter.:-)

I will admit that I'm with Mia Vaan re: protection. Maybe it's that the Lucifer writers have made me paranoid, I don't know. In any event, very nice writing.

You used a wrong section. Loved it otherwise :-)