Can’t wait to see the next chapter

my only complaint is that it's written on second person, with the main character's story being told to them. it rather thoroughly destroys any sense of emersion. other then that's it an ok chapter.

For reference, green meteors/shooting stars are magnesium based, and are a real thing. In fact although Jan is about half a month too late, the Geminid Meteor Shower happens not too far off then and semi-often will have green meteors.

Huh, so Taylor got her escalation from her father.

I started again from the start, and 203 chapters later realized I have another favorite story. I was originally thinking that it was long, but the chapters are not too long or not too short. just right!

thanks

Oh my fucking god. Why is she sharing this information?! She doesn’t need to!

Eww 2nd Person POV

How that explanation could be given… “Hey Alexandria, we caught the Simurgh, we threw a pokeball at it!” Simurgh poops out “Ziz Ziz!”

I usually hate you perspective fics but this was is written decently well.

Think mm could pull a trebuchet out of her pocket?

Imagine all the porn and the ads and the porn ads and software just for blocking same. They made super powerful devices with artificial intelligence for war, sure, but the commercial sector had to get some trickle down tech... Turns out 80%of processing power is tied up in firewalls.

So when they say Enforcers they mean assassins, check.

People) like Kayleigh don't make it past age 10 because they jump into cages at the zoo to pet the lions. She must have had very attentive parents.

Even without Cauldron they're still gonna duck everything up

Wow, Saint was right all along, Dragon is going to betray Humanity for another flavor of the same.