Reviews for Magical Girl Escalation Taylor
ZhaWarudo chapter 181 . 9/15/2022
None of the templates scream to Kaiyleigh so she'll rather take the weakest device and remain D-ranked. She's a bright one.
ZhaWarudo chapter 166 . 9/15/2022
fucking Disney
ZhaWarudo chapter 158 . 9/15/2022
The fuck Vista thinks she is? most exp my ass, she just accidentally stumbled on Hookwolf once, otherwise her patrols were useless. Taylor got into actual fights ten times by this point.
ZhaWarudo chapter 155 . 9/15/2022
You said Behemoth's core is in the base of his tail, not Leviathan's.
ZhaWarudo chapter 142 . 9/15/2022
Yeah such a change from thinking she's 18-20 to 16, as if both are not kids.
ZhaWarudo chapter 141 . 9/15/2022
What a dull person, she wants to be a cashier instead of a healer or tinker.
ZhaWarudo chapter 125 . 9/14/2022
There are plenty of places that are empty, like warehouses. Vista can't find shit that way.
ZhaWarudo chapter 116 . 9/14/2022
so what if taylor knows coil isf really a villain? unless she's in his way somehow, that's not a reason to exotic bomb her
ZhaWarudo chapter 113 . 9/14/2022
Tim should get rid of major weapons in Vista's arm as soon as she graduates Wards. Those are weapons she can carry instead of them weakening the arm's defense.
ZhaWarudo chapter 111 . 9/14/2022
two gangs shooting at each other with machine guns, one wounded?
ZhaWarudo chapter 87 . 9/14/2022
It's like you couldn't decide whether to go with funny misunderstanding from Alexandria taking leaps of logic rather than simply asking Taylor, or making it serious. In fell flat.

You're not showing Taylor learning magic at all, just Storm doing everything for her. Same with Danny, suddenly he's a ladies man but you haven't shown it, nor why is the racoon into him. Just there, it's supposed to be funny, why aren't you laughing?
ZhaWarudo chapter 78 . 9/14/2022
Why didn't she extend the cables and let Storm handle hacking.
ZhaWarudo chapter 72 . 9/13/2022
I'm sick of stubborn unbelievers in magic and aliens in fiction, especially if they have other weird shit going on.
ZhaWarudo chapter 51 . 9/13/2022
Saying she wants to help Purity isn't equal to making a lot of big promises.
ZhaWarudo chapter 4 . 9/12/2022
You could say anything is better than annoying worrywart Danny, still it's weird to pull it all of a sudden.
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