Reviews for Scion of Sorcery: Phase One: Potter-Strange? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the story. the only issue i have (and its not really an issue) is the author notes at the beginning and the end. i would put them at the end. its hard to skip them when the reader is listening to the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did enjoy your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You already had Harry super powerful Not sure why you felt the need to make him unrecognizable from HP. It weakens the story I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry... I am your father... |
![]() ![]() Strange sensing something when his son was born, reminds me of a scene in the comics that was cut out. He had a daughter; he didn't know about. His wife, Clea had used magic to cloak her existence from him, to protect both of Sophia (daughter) and Stephen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hasta ahora vamos bien, veamos como sigue esta historia. ¿Aquí existe Franklin Richards? Sería buen amigo de Harry, más porque ambos serían niños con poderes muy fuertes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are doing amazing work please continue the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, but odd story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya, why did they send harry to slytherin? He would have been better off in hufflepuff, imo. |
![]() ![]() albus the fool dumbledork lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sad to see you giving up writing. I have enjoyed your stories. Many positive vibes for your future endeavors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would have expected the hat to say Ravenclaw, based on the way you’ve described him so far… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww shit just discovered you! Love itWould hope to read how your story continues. Please do not believe all the negativity. |
![]() ![]() So unless Sirius blood adopts Neville he can't really get the black seat. Harry atleast has black blood in him though his father's side of Dorea Black. |