I just had finish reading the intro to this chapter and I want to tell you that your way to tell the story is really amazing. I like that the love is slowly building.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

after the bomb from last chapter, the ending of this one is amazing!...I was a little mad at you for a moment. Something like "whaaaat? Again?!" But, it is not so far-fetched considering they did stay a couple of years there and you told us about the sessions in the study

hmmm. I am very sleepy and I need to go to bed so I will tell you my theories: Marley is Bella (Scarlet's )daughter. It doesn't make sense, to kidnap a little girl who can't help not even a little. Paul? Maybe an undercover agent.I hope. And Lola, will help them escape together with emmet and all of them will go to Forks.

Wow, loved this. You’re a fantastic writer!

Absolutely loved this story! You did an amazing job!

this was an amazing journey. such a bittersweet thing for it to end. But I must say unlike many others, you tried to make this as realistic as possible. that while Edward's affection and care helped Bella heal, it definitely wasn't a 2 second thing. It takes time to heal from such trauma and you did a really good job at portraying them. Thank you so much for this. And thank you for not removing it, so that readers like me could read it way after this story was finished. Stay strong, safe and sane

love the family dynamics
Who is at the door?

Beautiful proposal

Marley is one quick cookie.

What a journey for all of them. I'll miss them so much.

and we all went awwwwwww

I am missing these two already

I love that they followed him. Sad about his grandfather.

Who was kid at door?
Going to Italy is maybe a good thing

I loved this chapter. getting closer