Reviews for Luna's Poems(companion piece to First Attempt) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is delightful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this. I feel the first two lines sum up Luna. Yes, she is most beloved, but only by people who appreciate her. She is "most alone" because many people do not appreciate her. I like the relationship between Luna and her internal ghost. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "...like two complementary puzzle pieces" I don't know whether you were thinking of the relationship between Neville and Luna, but this is one of the factors that define it. Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A buoyant packet of soul." What a lovely image. But it is a packet of soul that can inspire its owner to do amazing things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful. It reminded me of that 'Dreamworks' logo where a child is fishing from a crescent moon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another interesting Lunar verse. Her feelings of being lost come out well in this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. These are really good poems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This was really sweet. Thank you. |