|Reviews for Luna's Poems(companion piece to First Attempt)|
| Cuthbert72 chapter 8 . 7/12/2020
This is delightful.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 7 . 11/13/2018
Thank you for this. I feel the first two lines sum up Luna. Yes, she is most beloved, but only by people who appreciate her. She is "most alone" because many people do not appreciate her. I like the relationship between Luna and her internal ghost.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 6 . 7/20/2017
"...like two complementary puzzle pieces" I don't know whether you were thinking of the relationship between Neville and Luna, but this is one of the factors that define it. Beautiful.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 5 . 4/27/2017
"A buoyant packet of soul." What a lovely image. But it is a packet of soul that can inspire its owner to do amazing things.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 4 . 3/21/2017
This was beautiful. It reminded me of that 'Dreamworks' logo where a child is fishing from a crescent moon.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 3 . 3/14/2017
Another interesting Lunar verse. Her feelings of being lost come out well in this one.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 2 . 3/9/2017
| rosebud1000 chapter 2 . 3/8/2017
Wow. These are really good poems.
| Cuthbert72 chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
Aw! This was really sweet. Thank you.