|Reviews for Blondes In Exile|
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 10/13
Another good chapter! What a read! I hope to see more! I'll also try to give you ideas if I can.
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 10/13
Good chapter! I enjoyed it! I'm thinking that since Naruto was caught bathing, it could happen to the girls too...like a flip flop of change!
I digress though. Off to the next chapter!
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 10/13
This is an interesting story so far.
| Dudtheman chapter 4 . 10/8
fun story thanks for the read
| Ninjarokusai chapter 4 . 10/4
great story so far! update soon please.
| review lord chapter 4 . 10/1
I figured the girl's clothes were gonna get worn out eventually, but didn't think they were gonna get stolen, but then again where there's hot springs monkeys are never too far off, and the girls finally are getting to naruto, i can't wait to see who's gonna make the first move or whats gonna drive them off the deep end. My money is on Temari making the first move, I would try to bet why but this story has so many ways it would drive her to make the first move, if anything the hot spring MUST be involved that would be hot, amazing job so far keep up the great work and update again soon
| Trife chapter 3 . 9/27
They could also look for clay on the islands and mix it with water and palm fibers to make mud bricks to dry and fire to make a kiln to fire more clay to make clay tiles for a roof and for hardening more bricks to build a house or they could build a good roof and then build a adobe house with stone, wood, and clay. This would provide a more insulated and protected shelter.
| daniel2610994 chapter 4 . 9/25
Oh man I don't know how this chapter eluded me :'v but it was so good, ino and temari are starting to like naruto for real and not the schoolgirl crushes like ino talked of sasuke in this chapter and she will even notice the differnce of what she “felt" for sasuke and how she is starting to feel for naruto, mainly how one never even looked at her much less even talked to her and how the other goes out of his way to make sure she is happy and the most comfortable she can while on an abandoned island :3 besides naruto in shippuden became really hanfsome when he lost all that baby fat, so she can't even complain in the looks and I think it won't be long until she peeps on him again and even madturbate to him, and the same for temari.
Now other thing that interested me is that apparently they were the only missing people, or at least garra and tsunade don't mention anyone else so they have shitty luck haha but maybe they could use this chance to train with each others help like temari helping naruto with his wind chakra or naruto helping them with stamina training :v
| snake1980 chapter 4 . 9/22
great job on the new chap and I know naruto will run into the monkeys that took both ino and temari clothing some time during his scouting of the island it will be funny.
| windwolf777 chapter 4 . 9/22
"Naruto had to exorcise some real" the exorcise you have is for a demon. Exercise is the usage or activity kind of exercise. Very minor nitpick/help aside, very nice fic. Can't wait for more :) I really have no idea on the story on how to help, but I'm anxiously awaiting for more :). My only idea would be some sort of jutsu exercises. (And why doesn't Naruto summon one of the buntas to tell Jiraiya or Tsunade, (if this is passed his passing) his location? Minor possible plot hole aside, can't wait for more man :)
| spiritwolf35 chapter 3 . 9/21
Ok I am confused with your story like the time frame at the beginning of chapter 4 you said it has been a month since Naruto, Ino and temari were washed overboard ok but then you said Naruto was looking for meat because he was tired of eating fruits they gathering for a month I am confused how can he be eating fruit for a month if it has been a month since they were washed overboard when they were in the lifeboat for three weeks so how long have they really been there on the island
| spiritwolf35 chapter 2 . 9/20
The story is ok but I am sorry to be so literal about this but from what I read you make it sound that you can break and then rip a coconut in half and still have both halves full of milk well wouldnt the milk spill out when you rip the coconut in half that and bananas if there still green they dont turn yellow over night it takes couple of days to be nice and yellow but oh well lol with the coconuts I know from watching the show called Survivor oh and where is the boat they came in oh well please update soon
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/18
Update this story please
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/17
Mdhunter here. Good job with this chapter. Please continue with the next one real soon. Looking forward to it, and have a great weekend! :)
P.S. Can hardly wait for the lemons! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/16
While this is a very good story, I'd like to suggest two things.
of focusing on just one thing, try focusing on multiple things. It'll allow you to increase not only chapter length, but allow for more character development.
update this story more frequently, it's hard finding good Naruto fanfics with Temari and/or Ino. Both of wrong are my favorite girls of the series.
Otherwise keep up the good work, and I'm envious of those monkeys that stole Ino and Temari's clothing.