This is
amazing ! Thank you so much .

i get ir was important for the plot to progress but shouldnt a talented occlumens have some sort of defense against a boggart. Or just react less to fear in general?

I like it very much. The fact that Zou don't dwell long on their classes and talk more about their adventures. I like the way you show them grieving and maturing

Leaving this story here. I liked a lot of the changes that occurred here with Sirius, the various OC's not including Dirk or Priscilla. The premise was interesting and I thought getting over James was a good arc we were heading on, but honestly, her falling for Dirk and then them breaking up with Severus broke the story for me. Someone else might like that, but I don't.

I would have expected Severus to try for ravenclaw tp avoid all the vile DEs and the griff/slytherin enmity.

I love your characters!

DNF I feel tricked lol. To have sev and lily teasing at a relationship the entire first half then take a sharp right into relationships with OC’s is pretty frustrating. Not to mention the progression is slow going. There was a lot of really interesting bits but I just can’t hang anymore.

I love this story so much! I hope you continue it soon!

Left this fic years ago. Interesting idea, but the plot and character development is not well thought out. And Lily suddenly falling for Dirk. It seems like the characters have no emotions or feelings. Too much chapters, but no development. Where they are all going, except destroying Voldemort? It is definitely not a child's book like original hp was. So if there are pairings, so there are should be feelings and emotions. What was Lily's motivation when was going out with Snape at first ? For me she is not so perfect and good person as she described in the series. For those who gone through the war and matured earlier she looks irresponsible and unable to control her doings. It is obvious she is not obligated to response for Severus's feelings, to love him back or to be with him, but It looks unnatural for me to fall for the guy named Dirk.

I left this fic some years agi in this chapter because of lily and snape break, the storry ends snily? snape will have a girlfirend or something? if the answer is "no" i am good with that, but i need to know what i am going to read

This was absolutely fantastic. I devoured the story in about four days and wish there was more! Severus can’t catch a break, shame about Lily falling for Creswell :/ feels bad man but the heart wants what the heart wants; hopefully he can find love elsewhere.

I do love how Priscilla and Severus kick dirt at each other.

But yes, marrying Priscilla would keep her and Sage out of trouble (sadly, nobody seems to want Snape this time around, either). And children can be arranged with the Muggle turkey baster method which would pass any wizarding DNA test.

Sure, Priscilla is perfectly happy to deal with things and not think about Snape. So of course he's the first person she can think of to help her deal with Uncle Travis. Denial much?

Sage has thrown out a handy bump in the road that leads toward a nasty tattoo on his arm. Boyd will take some time to clear the way for him (surely Sage isn't the only gay wizard in the DE crowd). Though if his mother throws him together with a girl, it's possible the girl isn't too thrilled either and will insist on a *very* long engagement.

Severus is understandably concerned about his mother's judgement when it comes to men, and I really don't blame him. He still loves her enough not to abandon her, though, when some would be really tempted.

Excellent update. The Horcrux is still hidden from Dumbledore (at least for now), the courtship between Dirk and Lily is going swimmingly, and well, it's not actually a courtship except possibly in the Klingon sense (ducking and poetry) between Priscilla and Severus. And yet she's not really indifferent to him, is she?

Plus, she's offering information for entertainment instead of a bribe. For her that's real progress.

Hmmm, if they don’t get a new professor next year Voldemort will get suspicious