Reviews for The many Deaths of Harry Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really enjoyed this story. Wasn't sure I'd like it after I read the excerpt, but your writing style is very compelling. Loved Harry's characterization here, very thoroughly portrayed. There are a few inconsistencies that stand out, like Sirius not catching R.A.B. when Harry briefs him along with Neville and Hermione, but in the next chapter. There's also Hermione talking about Luna while she wasn't mentioned in the story at all. Little bits like these only stand out because of how tight and cohesive your narrative is throughout the story. But you solid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry. 3 times in 6 chapters. I'm glad you aren't in charge of my destiny. |
![]() ![]() This has been a fantastic journey. Great job! |
![]() ![]() You had me till Carolina reaper. That is an anachronism too glaring to overlook. The pepper did not debut till the 2010s. Frankly, the average scotch bonnet would suffice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so intense from start to finish. Like. you never let up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, read it multiple times, Top Ten! |
![]() ![]() I've never understood why Harry didn't just transfer to another school and leave England behind. |
![]() ![]() When does Harry get bright and investigate his vaults? When does Harry get Hedwig? Why did Harry decided to just murder Norbert/a instead of actually trying to find a home for the egg? |
![]() ![]() Why does Harry not have his vault key? |
![]() ![]() Why doesn't Harry have the key to his own vault? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a gem! Much grittier and dark but very well written and the timing felt right. Thank you for this wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() How does Harry get his vault key? |
![]() ![]() I loved this story so much that I read it twice :-) Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() Niptick: while Harry is destroying the Ring, the text says he's hearing a voice from the "Locket" instead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a good ending. Hermione is the best. |