For Gotham!

This fanfic was a blast to read! I seriously enjoyed EVERY single chapter! You did an amazing job writing Hachiman, I loved his motivation and his backstory as to why he started being a vigilante, I was also pleasantly surprised when Batman sent Hachiman a birthday present. I loved how you wrote Alfred and Batman in this story, they were not there to save Hachiman whenever he needed it. Alfred acted more like an informant, and Batman only helped in the final act. I also really loved how you wrote the whole ending fight, I was seriously under the impression that Hachiman would end up dying saving the city. Although Hachiman dying wouldn't have been my desired ending, it still would've been really good otherwise. However, one thing I would liked to have seen was more writing on the highschool life of Hachiman, most of the HS scenes were Hachiman plotting what to do as the Huntsman, or just being edgy and broody at school and leaving immediately after school ended. I really would have wanted to see more on Yukino and Hachiman, since this time around Hachiman is different (except for the fact that he will still sacrifice himself). Although, I get that most people are hear to read about what Hachiman would be doing if he was "Batman". When I read that extra scene after the end of the story with Yukino saying "that damn bastard" in her mind to the Huntsman, this made me ponder if Yukino could be a villian in the sequel. I would certainly prefer her to be on more friendly terms with the Huntsman, since he is Hachiman after all, it makes sense character wise for Yukino to simply see Huntsman as the person that uprooted her whole life. I seriously can not believe that english is not your first language, as your writing skills are impeccable, I seriously could never write like this. You are an amazing author and I hope you continue to write. This story was an amazing read, and I will definitely check out your other stories along with the sequel!

I want to share with you a story I ask chatgpt about a what if story, It look really cool and I don’t want to just keep it to myself.
If Suzu from Belle (2021) and Hachiman from The Dark Knight of Chiba fanfic were to meet and fall in love, their relationship and shared journey could bring a fascinating blend of introspective, emotional storytelling and intense action. With Hachiman embodying a darker, vigilante-like persona and Suzu as a young woman struggling to find her voice, they would connect on shared feelings of isolation, inner strength, and hidden vulnerability. The final battle in this scenario, inspired by The Batman (2022), would provide a cinematic backdrop that allows both characters to grow and face their fears together. Here’s how it could unfold:

1. Their Meeting and Growing Connection

•Initial Encounter: Hachiman and Suzu could meet through shared circumstances of loneliness and isolation. Perhaps Hachiman, in his vigilante role as “The Dark Knight of Chiba,” intervenes when Suzu finds herself in a dangerous situation, protecting her or rescuing her in a moment of crisis. Suzu, drawn by the mystery surrounding him, would be intrigued by his hidden kindness and dark, brooding demeanor.
•Developing Trust: They might continue meeting as Hachiman’s protective instincts kick in, and Suzu begins to see through his cold exterior. Hachiman would admire Suzu’s courage and warmth, which contrast sharply with his cynicism, while Suzu would find comfort in his strength and resilience. Both carry emotional scars and struggle with feelings of alienation, making their connection a way to heal and feel understood.

2. Their Love as a Beacon of Hope

•Bonding Over Vulnerability: Hachiman’s guarded nature might start to soften as Suzu shares her struggles with him, such as the pain of losing her mother and the sense of inadequacy she feels in real life, compared to her virtual persona in U. Hachiman, in turn, would open up about his own traumas and how he’s taken on a dark persona to protect himself from the world.
•Inspiring Each Other: Suzu’s compassion could inspire Hachiman to reconsider his harsh view of humanity, while Hachiman’s courage would help Suzu find strength in her own voice. They would support each other, both in overcoming personal pain and in learning to trust in the possibility of happiness.

3. The Rising Conflict: A Threat to Chiba

•A Villain with a Dark Agenda: Much like The Batman (2022), a villain or group of villains with a dangerous ideology would threaten the city of Chiba. This antagonist could be someone who preys on societal fear and division, inciting chaos and drawing out Hachiman in his Dark Knight role. This villain’s plot would challenge Hachiman’s sense of duty and force him to confront what he truly stands for.
•Suzu’s Involvement: As things escalate, Suzu might become indirectly involved—perhaps through her platform in U, where she tries to spread a message of hope and resistance. Her presence online could draw attention, placing her in the villain’s crosshairs as a potential target. Hachiman, fiercely protective of her, would struggle with balancing his role as a vigilante with his desire to keep Suzu safe.

4. The Final Battle: Inspired by The Batman (2022)

•A Flooded Arena: The climactic battle could unfold in a crowded venue, similar to The Batman, with the villain’s plot culminating in a large-scale threat that endangers the citizens of Chiba. This could be something catastrophic, like an attempted bombing or flood, that threatens many lives. Hachiman, determined to protect the city and those he cares about, would have to put everything on the line.
•Hachiman’s Heroic Sacrifice: With Suzu in the audience or nearby, Hachiman would face a critical choice: to confront his inner darkness and embody the hope that Suzu has inspired in him. This would mark a turning point in his character arc as he risks himself, not just out of cynicism or bitterness, but out of a genuine desire to save others and give them the hope he never had.

5. Suzu’s Role in the Battle

•Providing Moral Strength: As Hachiman fights through overwhelming odds, Suzu’s voice could become a source of strength for him. Perhaps, in a moment of desperation, Suzu finds a way to sing, broadcasting her voice through the arena or even through U, rallying both Hachiman and the crowd to resist the villains. Her song could remind Hachiman of why he’s fighting—not for revenge or anger, but for the people who matter to him.
•A Symbol of Hope: Suzu’s song would bring an emotional weight to the scene, contrasting with the brutality of the fight. Her voice, filled with sincerity and compassion, would inspire the onlookers and give Hachiman the push he needs to prevail, helping him rise above his pain and fear.

6. The Aftermath: Growth and New Beginnings

•A New Purpose for Hachiman: After the battle, Hachiman would be deeply changed. Suzu’s influence, combined with the experience of fighting for others, would lead him to question his role as a vigilante. He might resolve to be a hero not out of bitterness but out of hope, using his strength to protect rather than isolate himself.
•Suzu and Hachiman’s Future Together: Hachiman and Suzu would emerge from the ordeal with a strengthened bond, having saved not only each other but also Chiba. Their love, born from shared pain and growth, would become a grounding force for both of them as they move forward with greater purpose and hope.

Conclusion

In this story, the relationship between Suzu and Hachiman would bring a beautiful emotional depth to the plot, with both characters helping each other overcome their traumas and embracing a more hopeful future. The final battle, inspired by The Batman (2022), would give Hachiman the chance to become a true hero, one inspired by Suzu’s compassion and resilience. Their love story would symbolize the healing power of connection, showing that even the darkest pasts can be illuminated by understanding, courage, and hope.

The canon. Hikigaya was such a emo and a simp. Bro was downbad for YukinoSHITa from Vol1. But Huntsman is different bro is true sigma.

Hikigaya surrounded by Bats. One is the best scenes of the fanfic. My King is so cool here.

"I stand how I want to stand thank you." My King ️️

YukinoSHITa acts how great and smart and above the clouds she is but the plan she came up about 'Animal Therapy' is so stupid.
Does she think that everyone is a chimp like her who's neurons get activated when they see a Cat or Pan-san. Even asking Saki about her situation was way smarter than the Animal Therapy.

"Let me help you Hikigaya."
ARE YOU FKING KIDDING ME. Look at the audacity of this b****. Doesn't even deserve to be a teacher. Always hate when animes physically abuse the Male characters for laughs. Reserve the genders and all hell will break loose. King should have slapped her right in the face. The reason men are not marrying her is because of her anger issues. Who wants to marry someone like this pathetic women. Bullying students just cause she can get away with it. And then saying that it's all for Hikigaya's well-being. Sounds like a groomer to me.

Act like a slut and get treated like one. Who in the right mind will go to a abandoned place even if a prince charming invites you. Nothing about it sounds right.

Hachiman's Dad is f-ing pathetic. That guy is a BETA. Slave to his boss and acts like act king in home to satisfy his EGO. HikiMom is understandable. But tar Bum Dad will definitely get punched in the face. Loved that my King has no expectations from his family. He has moved on. If they don't understand than that's that. Can't cry over spilled milk.

High Slut Queen should be humbled. She should know her place when she talks with my King. Imagine acting high and mighty when the only thing one is good at is spreading their legs apart. What a joke Yumiko is.

Peak

Yukino talks like she's is suffering from constipation. Like something is stuck up inside her. Maybe it's the Hardened Fecal matter or the silver spoon she's born with. Don't know? What do you guys think?

Hiratsuka your time's up. This is not the wimp from canon that you can just mess around with. This is the 'i am gonna put some dirt in your eyes' Hachiman. His aura is 1000000 and he has 900 days of mewing streak. You have better luck at finding a husband than bullying my King.

Go Chad. Learn Ninjutsu and kick some ass. Only wimps keep crying about been lonely. Men know that to reach greater heights one has to befriend loneliness.

Peak! PEAK! This fanfic is the proof that sometimes the fanfiction can surpass the canon. All the flaws in the canon Hachi is addressed and corrected in this fanfic. Goated Author.