Forcible gender swap is a big no. if it is consensual? Then sure. But forced gender swap is not only wrong but a horrible thing to do. Also for those who are undoubtedly going to assume that i am against trans people and lambast me for it. I am NOT against trans people. I am against people making a choice to irrevocably change themselves before their brain’s chemistry as settled. If there was a simple potion that allowed one to swap gender back and forth at will and it was an easy and simple thing? Then sure! Heck some guys probably need that perspective anyway. But there is no such potion and all the procedures are painful and PERMANENT things. As such I can’t really agree with people under the age of 25 going through such.

Can you NOT have a political rant in the middle of your story? Or if nothing else some kinda warning it is one? I mean I give literally zero fecks who you support on either side. But it doesn’t really fit into your story, kinda breaks the rules of the site, and was very jaring to go from a story about percy to a political talk with no warning.

What a cliff jump. You had something decent, and it just devolves into mindless, sensless edgyness. What a shame.

I skipped chapter 28 I don’t even know what happened but don’t ever fucking do that again

Scorpion finish move or was it a subzero finishing move still bad ass

Amazing and hilarious chapter great job regret not reading this soone amazin fic 10 out of 10 would recommend

Love this so damn much anybody else wanted to slap annabeth when she said Percy didn’t need a bible

Amazing chapter love Zoe’s mentality in this and will this be a Percy/Zoe ship

sleeping is good for concussions, the patient needs reduced stimuli to help with healing

the description for the head injury, thats brain damage, a concussion

is the guy in the robe god or Michael

...Yeah I'm taking a short break. I'm aware of how horrible your stories can go, Hell son of Jashin was the first story of yours I read but... ho- no unholy shit that was fucking disturbing

And of course the rum gone

3 months later and weare here what an amazing journey

Hey, just read the final chapter you're the goat man, the best fanfic writer on the internet. For some reason I always come back to your works every few months and it never gets old, especially this one. I've always been a fan of AC and this story just blows it out of the water. Can't wait for whatever you have planned but hasta luego

P.S. phase 2 will be something to behold, son of jashin definitely the one i look forward to the most, the first one fanfic i read by you lol