Awesome work

I get it, maybe when Mirage geys here the brain juices will return lol

I say do Elden Ring, that game is a literal beast of damn near unlimited potential, and I haven’t seen anyone brave enough to tackle its content. You are a dedicated author with an amazing understanding of a source material, and I think you’re among the few people capable of doing that story game any justice.

Okay I can’t tell who would be in chaos war. Are you expanding the roster? Cause adding on elden ring would make 9 different Percy’s and in the original chaos war it was the seven master with the known ones being sea devil, leaviathen, xeno, jashin, green eyed, and shinen. There was also a strong possibility for transcendence. But now…?

Good chapter, and I would prefer the RWBY crossover. I'm not a fan of gender bending Percy. When you announced that you had an idea for an elden ring crossover, I personally pictured that you would do something like you did with leviathan. Percy gets cursed, amnesia, becomes op, and maybe he replaces the Tarnished, or works alongside the Tarnished. Or something like that. But it's really up to you

Yes! Can't wait for Piper to meet Percy!

epic work and loved that they took over the Labyrinth, also hilarious joke

Dear author I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this story. These last few updates really helped me out of my depressive state and i greatly appreciate your writing.

I don't get why this story is controversial for some. Yes the author could've put warnings but this isn't Ao3 and we don't have tags here on . This is story is M and this author is known for some dark stuff so if it isn't for you that's fine

I loved this chapter. As a fan of this story I hope you can one day finish it. I don't know the details of what happened to you on Reddit but I hope you are ok and continue writing. This chapter was very good and I hope you can continue this story soon. Good luck writing!

Maybe review, spoilers ahead.

I read the story diligently till ch23, then spoiled myself to the end of the 4th life (because I was extremely curious about how the Zoë situation will end up and the story was becoming darker than I was comfortable with) and then to the end of 5th life (because by reading what I did about Cheyenne, Percy's sanity being challenged, and your allusions to ch28 convinced me that this story is grimdark, a genre I don't like reading tbh) and thus read up the end of 5th life (which convinced me that your other MC is also equally broken, though your resolution of Percy's issues was good, reminded me of Wheel of Time)...

That said, amazing and really ambitious story. Really interesting plot. Well-written. When you use humor, it works. You provoke thought and write moral debates well.

But you make your MCs suffer way more than most normal readers can stomach (especially because there are no warnings in the first chapter, the summary is very tame, and while the story touches on spiritual themes, it is much more dominated by tragedy and angst.) Plus, things from present life like: Gabe managing to turn Percy into a wanted criminal (how did the police take him seriously and why did he end up in news?), Ares molesting her, Medusa molesting Lou, chapter 28 and Nero... I seriously hate that you keep torturing him relentlessly by creating situations that do not exist in canon and are shocking in the PJO world (police should not be taking word of a smelly, jobless substance abuser over that of a missing child who has no history of violence or truancy, Medusa, in no version of her history, has any penchant for molestation, Nero doing such drastic things is horrifying).

So I'm gonna be dropping this fic, maybe following it up just to check how it goes. But please, improve the summary and/or replace genre with Adventure/Angst or Spiritual/Angst (since in PJO stories, adventure is a given).

Also, fact that Percy will be raped and tortured multiple times (in both past and present) in graphic detail must be warned of as soon as he departs for the first mission at the earliest, because it is kinda major. Not all readers can stomach it.

Also, keep being brave with this story as I'm sure you have weeded out most incompatible readers by this point, but work harder to warn of new readers in advance. That said, you are a genuinely good writer and I'd love to read something humorous, or just with less suffering for the main characters from you. Unfortunately, I find myself warned off the Backup Plan because of spoiling myself.

For what it's worth, thank you for the experience. It was great while it lasted.

Hey love this story and hope you continue it. I can't wait to see what you have in store and hope you can finish it soon. You are a great writer and i'm glad i found your stories, what i read I liked a lot.

I don't know much about the subreddit drama but I hope you are ok and safe

That was beautiful to read.

R.I.P the children and Roach :’(

The bible does not call the olympians or any other pagan god false. 'False gods' are in fact people like some of the pharoahs of Egypt. people who claim they are gods when they are not. The only time The bible even mentions other religions is the commandment stating that worshippers of God are not to worship other gods. Apart from that good chapter.

Good job