|Reviews for Farewell Samwise|
| Only Human chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Well, I've decided to read your whole story. You've finished the whole thing with only one very short review. It make me sad. :(
I got 5 reviews on my one shot and you wrote a whole tale and only got 1.
Anyway good first chapter. A little hard to understand the colloquilism(SP?) you used, but it worked.(Just makes me have to think harder)
Poor Sam, nobody wants to hear his stories anymore. I guess that happens with even the best stories. *sigh
I like the line "Minor business of state would wait, in favour of the far more serious"-food is very important, most definitely.
When you refer to the Mr. Geswen, do you mean one of the dwarves that was friends with Mr. Bilbo?
Overall, good first chapter, but its after midnight, and I need some sleep. I'll finish the rest later.
P.S. I've found the best way to get reviews is to review other people's stories, especially the ones that just started doing lotr fanfiction(sometimes people who are established fanfiction writers don't review that much.)
Anyway, look forward to reading the rest of your story.
| Nerys chapter 15 . 3/16/2003
Just so you don't get put off. I like this story! It is developing very well