Reviews for Professor Shockwave |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't atlas has emergency gravity dust powered safety protocol in place if staff was stolen like in the show? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the way you wrote Raven better than canon writers. Raven is one of my favorite characters from RWBY, one of my Top 5. In case you're wondering, the other 4 are Yang, Neo, Blake, and Pyrrha (gone too soon, but never forgotten). Anyway, since Raven is a favorite of mine, it bothers me how RWBY's story seemed to make her such a hypocritical and almost hated character due to her cowardice and her disregard for Yang. I think they could've treated her character better, and I'm sure I'm not the only person who believes that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I love Soundwave(only bringing it up because of your AN) specifically transformers prime Soundwave, that Soundwave is just the most intimidating transformer there is, a completely screen face, hears and sees everything, slick nimble and quiet, and the not speaking just adds to everything, he’s just awesome in general |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know why I didn't get the notification, but my curiosity got me to find your udates so I'm happy anyways. The Relic of Creation made my ideas go all over the place with how it can be applied, especially since he use real materials to build something that will not disappear. Like if a giant ship crashed and was rebuilt after its crew assembled all of the materials needed. And of course, I would like to see Amber and Shockwave together, but for it to make sense it has to be something like a small but slowly growing sense of desire, how in the smallest moments any thought of her brings a slowly growing physical response that would eventually affect him. A slow-growing side effect of having organs, especially the fun one. I wish you luck in your endeavors, have a great day. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always internally cheer when I see an update from this story. Can honestly say it's my favorite. So Atlas is possibly doomed? Welp, let's see what Shockwave decides to do. Always nice to see Fiona. She's neat. :v And now you've made me look forward to seeing Shockwave and Ambrosius interact. And as I've said before, I'd definitely would like it if Shockwave and Amber somehow got together. But again, I feel like that would involve Shockwave having to stop repressing his emotions and start feeling something before anything like a relationship could happen. If you end up going for a Shockwave/Amber pairing, I'll look forward to seeing how that plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I figured out a purpose for the Happy Huntresses or at least for Robyn in particular: political leverage. If Shockwave can get them to meet and somehow they agree on any points that may be fruitful for him, he can make them win the council election against Jacques Schnee and then use that and his logical persuasion to make legal some of the hindrances currently affecting him, at least in Atlas, for both that and reduce the amount of influence that James Ironwood has. Just a suggestion, not something particularly good per se. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Armor Clad Faith! hath crumble, from its ash Armor Clad Logic rose to the outer space |
![]() ![]() I must say that you have definitely captured my interest as you have done so well for an AU version of RWBY with having Shockwave being a professor at Beacon Academy turning the tide of future events as I loved seeing Mt. Glenn being turned into his secret lab, doing Project Predacon but I must ask since you are doing Transformer Prime did you have other Descepticons in mind or any of the Autobots in mind before you chose Shockwave as the main character for this story? But till the next chapter have a good evening and see you around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god Amber became Cinder clone no1's mom |
![]() ![]() Whatever direction you intend to take with this story… is likely going to be better than whatever direction Rooster Teeth is already taking with "RWBY" (who are just 'flogging a dead horse' at this point). I’m already fascinated by your characterisations and story progression so far… As for the 'tentative' Shockwave and Amber pairing? Initially, I was a bit apprehensive… but considering this is a fan-fiction crossover, I’d say do whatever you wish — the scientist in me will be curious about this 'social experiment'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. We do not speak of Volume 8. The events that happened in there are extremely illogical. I will not explain myself why because I value my sanity. 2. I say find a way for both to exist at the same time. 3. Cinder acting like a baby in mind is fun & great karma. 4. As for Shockwave X Amber? I can see it. He did save her life and he joked about the two of them being engaged. May as well make it serious. |
![]() ![]() Here is something, Atlas the CITY, is floating over a giant hole in the ground, that has a very, eerily similar, shape to atlas proper. So instead of the city just CRASHING down, how about making giant, cable/clamp thing's and, DRAGGING atlas down? Clear out the giant ditch, of it's populace, drag down atlas proper, and put it back in the ditch, where it effectively belongs, and then, utilize ambrosia to create the space bridge. Since atlas would be lynched into it's former position, the anti-gravity would be disabled, and the populace, no worst for ware, would finally see Atlas out of the skies forevermore. |
![]() ![]() I like this cross over but in fact only because shockwave,but bring the others to Remnant sound bad... if shockwave travel to space with coordinates he realized there's nothing there and start to think about the theory he is not even in his universe. About Amber and Shockwave? i was waiting for so long having shockwave and amber together even if shockwave is older than her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter looking forward to the next one |