so ozpin decides to let shockwave know abput salem. lets see what he does with that new info. along with whatever merlot tech he recovers.

Glad to see a new chapter. I would like to see Shockwaves thoughts to Remenet having a similer backstory to Cybertron, a god of creation and a god of destruction in endles conflict.

I bet Shockwave will compare the brothers to Primus and Unicron, it's the only logical answer.

Turning entire worlds into ashes is illogical.

I love this story. I like a clear and logical character. And I like the node to the rwby games. I especially like shockwave teaching. If I have one suggestion then how about refining shocks goal. Given a clear task like satellites or one overarching project. This is nearly a suggestion. I just want to add some ideas for this story to continue. It is bread so far and your grammer is far better then mine.

Interesting chapter, not gonna lie though, never was a fan of the 'origin' of the Grimm. If they hate existence so much, why do they not destroy forests and everything else.

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Ive waited sooo loooong

well for one thing, salem and unicron have many things in common, but salem to me seems just as ozpin's video contents describes her, live as long as you are useful, discarded once usefulness is over, while unicron (at least the prime version) has very little to no patience for that, no servants, only slaves bound by his dark will, his terrorcons being an almost exact replica of the grimm, in fact primus and unicron could be the gods of light and darkness almost

Nice chapter

My only gripe was how quickly Oz came to trust Shael with this info. Other than that, this chapter is awesome. Especially with Shockwave quickly formulating ideas as to why the Grimm could exist without knowing the truth.

At any rate, update soon.

Nice to have a update. I mean that with no sarcasm. Really. Sometimes unable to body language and other nuances online is a pain since by default anything said is shifted towards sounding brusque at best.

I know(?) it is a typo but 'Her hatred for Mankind as the Faunus is eternal' was interesting.

Hmm... I wouldn't be surprised if Shockwave considers Salem is a logical choice to side with for his own benefit. But would he?

Awesome. Keep it up! Good luck in Real life.

No offense Ozpin, but I think Shockwave is okay with that. -_- It's logical from his point of view.
Great chapter as always! Can't wait for the next one!

You need to fix every instance of "Mountain Glen" to add a second 'N' to it. All it takes is a google search to check the spelling. This includes both chapter titles and instances in the chapter itself.

"The Grimm were too many in number." - You need to space this line apart from the previous one.

and its* words were - Possessive.

Furthermore,* Mankind - You need a comma to break up those words.

They* are Creation - "They", not "the".

a *witch that is mysterious in many ways. - You don't need mysterious twice in one sentence, especially if you're going to describe the person as "mysterious in many ways". It's redundant.