The chapter is pretty good, i liked the interactions beetween team CVFY and those with their professors(who is a total badass, i really can't wait to see him with RWBY and JNPR), and i'm very curious to see whath you will do with Grimm's eclipse plot. Just i hope next fights will be more detailed and intense. I wish also(if i didn't tell you already) you had a good Christmas and will have a great year, keep up the good work and see you later.

P.s. if possible, when you're referring to the magic crystals, write Dust with the capital.

P.p.s. regarding Grimm's origins, actually i'm on the 'corrupted animals' idea, since i highly doubt they don't have a soul(otherwise how the dragon could shot lasers withouth some form of spiritual energy or Dust?), there are too few animals with aura unlocked and i'm not sure if the God(if he existed) could create something like his brother. I believe he just corrupted animals with aura, but found out his new minions were unable to reproduce, so he made them immortals and gave them the ability to respawn from the pools in Salem's domain(and is also possible she continue to throw animals in the pools when she needs new soldier). I think when she and/or the god will die, they will return in fact just beasts with aura unlocked, still very big, powerful and maybe could evolve in something else with time and training, but will have a role into the ecosistem and will be a source of food and resources for Huntsman and civilians(or hunting companions, like Zwei), like Monster Hunter, Toriko and some Xiaxia Novel, if you know. Sorry if i sound annoyind.

Oh I am so getting a predacon vibe near the end! Please tell me we see the king himeself!

Nice chapter my friend keep up the good work.

Will Shockwave find the Grimm Dragon? If he does will he be able to kill it by dropping the mountain on top of it?

MMMMOOOORRRREEEE!

and hands-on applications.* Add a period here. It fixes an otherwise awkwardly structured sentence.

So you've given team CFVY a story based reason to be away for the duration of canon, I like it. It supports the bridges you've made between the character and the show.

"No wonder your* manners - This one always hurts to read my dude.

attacked and her power* was almost stolen." - You missed the word "power" here.

"Ozpin is logical for now" Oh dear lord that title... any V3 events that happen are going to be most interesting.

Definitely liked this chapter. Liking the story a lot too. Sadly have to read the rest tomorrow as it is nearly midnight my time and I would like to not mess up my sleep schedule after just getting it back.

upon a new power.* Its shape - Missed a period.

So, a cybernetic arm, eye, and prosthetic ears. Purple hair, purple outfit, red eyes as well. What a picture that paints.

Can't say I noticed any errors grammar and spelling wise. You're the more familiar one with Shockwave here, I'll trust your judgement on his course of actions.

"Dramatic entrance?" He tilted his head slightly to the left. "Why would I want that?"
"Because you're a huntsman." She looked at him like the answer should have be clear as water. "Why else?" - You need to seperate these lines, probably FFnet's fault though.

"So are you into tech or something?* - A question should end in a question mark.

"They* were custom-made."

Don't have much else to say about this chapter, not because it was bad, but because nothing too significant happened.

"Your* combative skills

"We've* arrived

Shockwave researched* Atlas

So far so good I would say on Shockwave. Returning slightly to my previous review, Shockwave agreed with Megatron that his aggressive tactics were more beneficial in the end, and had no problem following Megatron. Which I interpret as 'going with the flow' which is how I thought this chapter went. So I would say you achieved what you intended to with this chapter.

anyone reading me* on this

hear this, then* you

simply doing its* intended

So, about Shockwave, when you say combat prowess, do you mean specifically in leadership? Because Shockwave is pretty much Megatron's equivalent if not superior in terms of raw power. Megatron is just way more aggressive in his tactics compared to Shockwave's slow and hesitant approach.

Enjoyed the chapter.

Please update please update

When is the next chapter?