Good chapter and I can't wait to see how shockwave handles the the situations that he will get in

... Okay? Cool

This story is extremely well-done. I love it!

wolf faunus is kinda common in rwby fanfic, although its more likely to appear with oc than estabilshed characters, a wolf faunus shockwave seems okay, although personally i perfer owl faunus, just so shockwave can be called professor birb by students

Hmm, I really don't agree on how saving Amber would be logical, or at least how Shockwave came to such a conclusion. He does not know of the Maidens, even if he did, it's just fairy tales in this world. Sure Amber displayed powers that weren't Aura-based, but that could just mean that she's a variant compared to the common man of Remnant. Shockwave would no doubt be curious by such display of power, but I believe that this power alone would not warrant him to risk his life to fight. Him saving Amber so that she owes him a debt, now that's Decepticon thinking right there.
What I'm trying to say is that more information would be needed to appease Shockwave's "logic threshold" to warrant him in helping Amber. What if Amber was a bad guy and backstab Shockwave when he isn't looking? What if Cinder and co were actually huntsmen who were trying to take an escaped criminal to justice. There are too many variables that get in the way. So, I found Shockwave's action of helping Amber to be illogical, or rather too premature.

As for earlier in the chapter, I find it humorous that Shockwave would have such a bad opinion of the White Fang, considering how he basically tortures for a living back at Cybertron. That's like an alcoholic trash-talking people who go to a bar to drink even though he has a bottle of whiskey underneath his bed.

Shockwave was my favorite !
Glad this series does a great job showing him

darn good.

Admitting that this chapter was quite the filler is true. But I gotta say, escaping Winter is one thing. But creating the dinobots...ya that definitely was risky.

But worth it!

Gotta say, this is better than I thought it would be. Normally I'm turned off by fics that make transformers human/downscale but it's written wonderfully.

i was hoping shockwave would be a birb faunus, but it looks lke he's an aquatic, so maybe a shark faunus? that would be cool, or is that his semblance? breathing underwater seems kinda lackluster but i might be mistaken

Lol that was awesome! Keep it up!

Interesting first big fight.

Is he a fish faunus of some kind?

pleas update soon

This was a good chapter, loved how you did this, keep up the good work.

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