|Reviews for Familiar Days|
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/24/2019
Pretty good start - would be happy to read more if you ever wanted to continue
| oldspacecadet3 chapter 5 . 3/12/2017
It would be a good idea to change Centorea's nickname back to Cerea, as I thought you were referring to a totally different individual of the same race. But that might just be me.
For the rest, I'm used to new characters being introduced in story out of the blue, so to speak, therefore spelling of names correctly is usually of little concern the first time, but keeping the spelling correct afterward does tend to give the indicated character a more established ongoing identity so to be easily recognizable at any other time, unless the character is pointed out as to be OOC in author's notes.
I am enjoying the story overall, you are doing a good job. Yay!
| chynnchilders chapter 3 . 3/9/2017
I'm so happy, you're using Kyuri in your story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2017
Nice introduction. I wonder how this gonna play out