Reviews for To Love and Protect |
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Merlenyn chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 So, Ron and the rest of them all know now that Harry is going to have to stay with Severus all summer and learn Occulamency and dueling... and I'm right there with Severus on wanting to smack Remus around for how he's blaming Harry even if he's saying he's not blaming Harry and all that jazz. Seriously... grr! And then for Harry to actually SEE that when Ron went charging downstairs with the rest following... Severus even felt bad for him and was pissed at Remus, not that he said anything. Of course they fought over the clothes, but at least Harry accepted it finally. And I love Cora's sense of humor, teasing him with the ideas of nothing but red, gold, green, and silver clothes. XD And Severus found it amusing too! Woo! Also we were soooo close to Harry looking through the rest of that box, darn those 200 lines! XD And he's probably tired enough that he'll go to bed and forget about it again! Grrrr! XD I'm sooooo anxious to see Harry find the letter explaining about the spell Lily used and what the necklace really is... And see if he goes running to Severus to see if he can tell if it's a trick or just speak the words to release his mother immediately to see if it's true and have some sort of ward go off that lets Severus know there's an extra person suddenly in the manor? Does he have that kind of ward? lol Or Cora would sense an extra human? XD Oh man, however it happens, it's going to be interesting... Severus really needs to figure out HOW to teach Harry how to clear his mind instead of just telling him to clear it and box all his thoughts and emotions into a box and hide it. Seriously man! XD |
kainzer chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 I really like your story a little short chapters but good hope that Severus and Harry create a relationship first before Lily returns. I wait next chapter |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 I like this story quite a bit. I hope eventually Severus will stop calling him "Potter" though. I know right now he is still more his professor than his guardian or maybe Dad. One little point. Instead of having Harry say "These ones are really nice, so thank you." when he was thanking Snape for the new clothes. The correct way is to say THESE are very nice..." These covers the clothes you don't have to put "ones" with it. :-) That is the same as saying: The clothes, the clothes are very nice. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Keep up the good work! |
TEhen chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Severus is being nice to Harry, he even bought new cloth, a big change from him! |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Very interesting chapter! |
kirsty21 chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 cool update soon thanks |
Cukika chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Wow! Excellent! I can't wait to Harry read his mother letter, update! |
Hudy Leak613 chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
Macskamici chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 This was a good chapter. Severus is doing well with Harry. |
Mokus chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 How sad Remus didn’t want to talk to Harry, maybe he need more time after Sirius death! |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Great chapter! |
Christine chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Good chapter! I feel bad for Harry, with Remus reacting as he did. And hopefully they will make a breakthrough with Occlumency. Maybe he'll even be decent with dueling? I'm really eager for Harry to get back to that box and for your next update. :-) |
Entertainment lover chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Nice chapter |
Nagilover4ever chapter 6 . 4/10/2017 Love it. Update soon. |