| Reviews for To Love and Protect |
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   Fae0306 chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Excellent! |
| LyraCarina chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 great chapter! |
| Outofthisworldgal chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Do you think Petunia nd Vernon will change the way they feel about Harry and that they did abuse him or not? I think Petunia might but Vernon will just blame him more. Does he figure out the necklace next chapter? (jumps up and down) |
| Macskamici chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Fantastic update! Harry was rescued by Snape himself! In the previous chapter you wrote “the necklace that had been on the floor after the creature had cast the curse was now residing in the Potter’s vault a long with a letter” how came so much time had past and the necklace from the vault was not found and was found by Harry in the attic? |
| C.C.Squirrel chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Excellent chapter. I love how Snape came to the rescue and let his wrath be known. Petunia and Vernon will forever remember their treatment of Harry. It's good Dudley wised up but now he has to live with his horrible parents. I'm anxious to know how Snape knew to come to Harry's aid. |
| mandancie chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Absolutely loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can. |
| white collar black wolf chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Liked it |
| rowenasheir chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Is Harry a Snape or was Lily SS sister? |
| Cukika chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 What a amazing start! Poor Harry, his summer days are awful with the Dursleys! |
| shera98 chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 I love this story so far! I adore stories of a caring Severus. Can't wait for more! Dying to find out what happens if the letter with the necklace was in the box Harry took. Keep up the great story please! |
| Professor Potterhead chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Love this! Can't wait for more. |
| Hildygirl chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Wow- different and I know more great writing is surely coming ! |
| Lora Palmer chapter 2 . 3/14/2017 Wow, I'm loving this story so far! You have a great way of drawing in the reader with fantastic descriptions, building tension, and good dialogue. My one little editorial feedback is, in the first chapter, you let the reader know that the necklace automatically goes to the vault in Gringott's after Lily's spell is done (and show it going there), yet Harry discovers it in Aunt Petunia's attic in the second chapter. I do really like how Harry discovered his mom's trunk there, along with the necklace and treasured pictures, so maybe in the first chapter it could be mentioned that the necklace would leave Gringotts and appear to Harry wherever he'd find it once he had advanced enough magically to be able to do the spell that would release Lily? Or something along those lines. Maybe this was explained, and I missed it? |
| GRandElusYon chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 Awesome start! You have a real gift for writing, and truly put the reader in the scene. Can't wait to see where this goes. Please have more soon |
| kirsty21 chapter 1 . 3/11/2017 cool update soon thanks |