|Reviews for The Hearts of Many|
| ImagineFiction27 chapter 9 . 5/10/2020
I really wish you would continue this story, it amazing and I would love to see where it could go!
| AlwaysShan chapter 9 . 12/14/2019
Really enjoying the story so far! I think right now their interactions are rather awkward, but I imagine that’s what you’re going for. I’m personally always a fan of when Snape is his full snarky self, but Hermione begins to realize not to take his jabs personally, and embraces the snark, so to speak.
Whatever you decide, can’t wait for the next chap!
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 9 . 11/10/2019
Nah I think you’ve got a good balance
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
Oh but think of the ways she could also help you Snape and no I don’t mean sexually I just mean in general!
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 6 . 11/10/2019
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 5 . 11/10/2019
But she’s fair mostly! He does her a disservice by assuming she’s like lily or black!
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 4 . 11/10/2019
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 3 . 11/10/2019
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 2 . 11/10/2019
Bella is creeping me the fuck out
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 1 . 11/10/2019
I love that Harry gives Hermione Little hidden lovin...
| ZoeyOlivia chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Good solid start.0
| M chapter 9 . 5/27/2019
in case you were still wondering: IT FEELS SO RIGHT, DUDE, I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT IT and i don't think you're writing snape to be too agreeable - i think you're writing him with a good balance of ornery and and a potential love interest who doesn't make her miserable all the time. i actually think the way you let us glimpse the small parts of him when he isn't such a huge jerk, but leave hermione out of the loop, elevates the story. both hermione and snape feel right to me, though i'm not sure about how fast snape starts to refer to her by her first name, even if it it's only in his mind, instead of just 'granger', you feel? but that doesn't matter because i think it's marvelous
| M chapter 7 . 5/27/2019
i loved this chapter - i love the story overall, but this chapter was wonderful. i thought for sure you were going to use the "if we're married we can get around the whole 'Voldemort will know that you know and therefore everyone will die' issue with this ancient magical property found in this one rite that everyone's forgotten" trope that seem to pop up so often because people are trying to figure out how to introduce their romance; don't get me wrong, i love that plot line, but i'm pleasantly surprised with the direction you took and i think it fits beautifully. anyway, i love the direction you're heading with this and i think you're writing it very, very nicely
| Slytherin's Strumpet chapter 9 . 1/25/2019
Helloooo, love how the story is progressing, and you’ve done a good job at Hermione and Snape’s characterisation
| Tilty.bbb chapter 9 . 1/9/2019
This was a fantastic start well done