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Guest chapter 15 . 11/27
"Fracking Dread Lord."
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Thanks for this, and the... excerpt? from Rage.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/27
Vader could ride a lucrehulk back to Byss
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Lmao

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The babies and toddlers stayed with the elves and nanny droids. Another match made in heaven. Don't fuck with a elf around a nanny droid. Things went to kill mode instantly.
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I've enjoyed this tale so far, and I think the BBEG 'Final Fight' was appropriately 'simple'.
Given that you did a helluva good job downplaying and underselling Harry's MoD/godlike aspect, bitch slapping the sidiot like the (comparatively) weak-arse joke that he (comparatively) was worked just fine.
Wanderer chapter 13 . 11/26
The alternative was sending his greatest weapon to where the Dread Lords children were. Luna was infinitely amused. It was like a silent comedy from the early days of film watching the Sidiot. Those stones she had enchanted to attract people and get picked up and carried for a few hours before being given to someone else that cast subtle glamor's were actually working. Though transdoshians appearing with messy black hair and green eyes wasn't. How had that stone gotten all the way to there?
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*blinks* Yeah, uh Luna... yeah.

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Yoda nodded "Jedi they are. Important she is. The Force agree with Master Lovegood it does."

Mace nodded and sent the message. "Killed it will get us, if something wrong it goes."

Yoda looked at him "Duel you need, see I do."
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*coughing, choking really, as I laugh*

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Sidious glared at the reports. Darth Dread had gone still. Alderaan. Damn. No sense repeating that lesson. Well, time to deal with the Hutt's then.
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LOL! He can learn!

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She had her AK cannon. In the worst case Palpy wasn't getting near her worm hole. And if it killed most of the core, well they were all going to die eventually anyway. Luna frowned, she might need to go lay on a sponge.
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Ya Think!?
Yikes!

Incredibly fun way to tie the two galaxies together, this is incredibly well done, thanks so much for the entertainment!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26
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Those holo's were so in demand, multiple copies were running on multiple channels on the holonet continuously. A channel for each branch of magic with the lessons coming on from first year to mastery then repeating.
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uhmmm... doesn't the empire have folks that could learn this stuff as well?

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Luna decided it was time for a curve ball "So I can have money for my Avada Kedavera cannon?"

Hermione blinked "Your what?"

Luna passed her a padd. Hermione looked at it and her expression grew horrified "Luna this could really work."

"Duh."

"Luna!"

Mace slumped in his seat "Fracking Dread Lord."

"Hey, wasn't me!" Harry looked around innocently.
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There are 'curve balls' and then there are 'Luna's Curved Spatial Ballistics" :D

I love how you name-drop then 'accommodate, adjust, or annihilate'
Wanderer chapter 11 . 11/25
Before comments, I... Just... wow.
ok. rebooting.
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The Royal Palace got a door in a public hallway that led to another in the Royal Lodge. Warded like Hogwarts or Gringotts of course. Intent wards, Harry hadn't done that and found it happening a bit puzzling. The runes were right there, but he would have never put them in that particular order. It was a mystery for now, but thy worked so he shrugged and left it.
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Hummm... it feels odd that he would not consider a change to the ward scheme as worth bothering to learn more about.

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Aayla drew her saber and cut the first pair of tossed panties into five pieces before they hit the ground and that didn't happen anymore. They were walking down the main street of the government center of Corellia at the time.
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Had to read it twice, but then couldn't stop laughing thru the rest of the paragraph.

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Mace blinked "Harry is a god?"

Hermione looked at Harry "You haven't told them."

Harry sighed "It didn't come up."

"And you just want to be Harry, not the immortal master of the personification of death. Vacation over, back to work." Luna gave him a glare and nudge with a foot.

Bars grinned "Dread Lord indeed!"
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*ROFLMA!*

*blink blink*
So, yeah. I'ma take a break, this broke my brainpan a bit. Pie sounds good.
Wanderer chapter 10 . 11/25
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Garm laughed then offered "All very domestic, but we are still technically in rebellion."

Apailana huffed "Technically? She arched a brow. "That desiccated failure called me a whore. I'm going to shoot him in the face."

The Wookie rep lifted his arms and yowled. Several other representatives cheered. Yoda sighed.
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LMAO! Amidala had nothing on this girl!

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So my luck is you will get off birth control and we will have sextuplets."

"Oh! I hope one of each primary color at least!" Aayla clapped her hands in front of her chest. Harry face palmed. Shaak laughed and laughed.

Mace looked over at them "Aayla will be pregnant in a month."

Obi wan sprayed caf over the railing. Plo Koon nodded "The Dread Lord needs heirs."

Obi wan turned "I'm going back to bed."

"Good, you need heirs too." Plo nodded.
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*facepalms*

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"Oh. I thought you were mad about the death threats there for a minute."

"Speaking of which have you slept with Luxa yet? We're getting close to one of my days in the pool." Bars arched a brow.

"Apailana!"

"Eeep!" The Queen of Naboo legged it. The command council fell out laughing. They were in tears when the doubles, guards, Roganda and Tis'wedu edged to the door and shot off after her. Luxa pouted at Harry and he walked away grumbling.
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Eeep! *falls over*

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Which was better than having to duel the Dread Lord or having assassin droids show up at your house.
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Remember Bars sending those ships? Whatever happened to those?
Wanderer chapter 9 . 11/25
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"Thank Merlin. Erh not that I don't like you and you aren't bright and pretty or anything."

Apailana laughed "I'm thirteen Harry. You haven't figured out Maris and Ahsoka yet. Let's not even talk about Celeste, Roganda and Tis'wedu. Plus you are a boy and Aayla probably had to hit you over the head with a boob or something. I'll have to ask Master Ti if she had a head injury, I mean getting involved with you?"
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Yep, that's a queen, making jokes and plans at the same time!

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he little tarts were perfectly capable of spreading for any number of idiots. They had always fucked everyone but him after all.
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*blinks* THAT'S what drove him? *sighs*
pa the tic

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The sponges being planet killers is a trip. I'm guessing they won't find the loss of those planets 'bad' as they are 'sith planets'.
Wanderer chapter 8 . 11/25
I love how the droids are basically house elves, give them praise and something to do and they are rabidly loyal and unmatched in productivity!

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Every force sensitive in the Republic sat in on Harry's classes. Well as soon as they took the oath and got a security code.
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I like how you "did the oath". You didn't. You just put the concept into the world and moved on. I can't tell you how many times I or an author I've spoken with have dithered, lamented, or just plain growled about getting the wording for an oath, song, or prophecy 'just right'. High Five for smarter solutions :)

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Bars growled and launched a ship full of assassin droids to Coruscant. He did that whenever he got angry at Palpatine.
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LMAO! It's like he's oblivious to the fact that he's so wealthy that sending an entire ship full of specialists (and therefore, very costly) is an afterthought. Love the idea that he's force sensitive as well. Squib, I assume?

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"Obi wan snorted "Darth Fairness. I think I would leave that Darth alone as well."
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Oh Shite that's good! Finally, Obi gets his Snark back, and it's a Goodun!

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Usually until they were sweaty messes. Harry always smiled and his eyes followed them after though. Oh so he liked athletic girls! Duh four of the hottest Jedi in the galaxy of course he liked athletic girls.

Shaak looked at Harry's frozen smile and laughed "I'll work on her occlumency some more. It's that weird connection thing though. She keeps us out no problem."
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LMAO! Unknowingly unintentional, or as clever as a snake?

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"So maybe that ward stone placement on Marauder wasn't an accident. Cheeky little buggers. Have to get them an oil bath for that." The Marauder R2 Tweedle Dee whistled and beeped excitedly and a wave of that swept the hold.
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You come up with the best lines!

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"The question is can the galaxy survive in the event of one of them succeeding in killing him. You just think you know what a Dark Lord is now. Aayla Secura would end this Galaxy. The others would cheerfully help her."
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*cringes*
Wanderer chapter 7 . 11/24
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Obi wan blinked "Master, not to put too fine a point on it, but I believe Master Secura is sleeping with him. At least Master Secura."

"Like an old woman you gossip Master Kenobi. Beneath you this is."

Obi wan blinked, owl like, and Mace couldn't hold it anymore, and for the first time in memory he cracked up laughing. He fell over and rolled on the ground pointing at Obi wan "Your face! That was exactly how I felt when I figured it out. It was all right there on your face!"
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Friggin frog, lol. Yoda really does like to passively screw with people's minds, esp now that he's quit actively intruding in them :P

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Who knew the Force hated iron and couldn't imbue diamonds? Well rather who has thought about why?"

Bail grinned "Especially that the carbon is hugging itself and took all the magic's snuggle space."
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Like Yoda, Bail is having a blast, following Harry around and making quips.
But it's different for Bail, it's like he doesn't have the pressure of the Senate bearing down on him from all sides or something :D
Wanderer chapter 6 . 11/24
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Harry frowned "But you all do it all the time. You summon things. Aayla told me you can put people to sleep. Hide yourself from people without the Force. That is a somnus, and a notice me not charm. Relatively safe and harmless magic."

Maris arched a brow "There is unsafe Force manipulation?"

Harry smiled. They would not say magic if they had to use five words otherwise.
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I love this, it's not quite 'running gag' level, but it definitely works as persistent humor :)

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Yoda watched as the laughing Jedi and scowling wizard tumbled out of his shelter. He looked at Harry "Help you with this I cannot. Senator Organa you must seek for guidance in this." The women cracked up and Harry groaned.
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HAH! Yoda Humor :D

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Yoda is actually a good being, and very adaptive. To tell you the truth he surprised me with that. Our old men held us back. The demons cured them. Usually by eating them.
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Yeah, that's... cured? lol

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The bounty hunters were not bringing in Jedi and now the worlds they themselves had committed crimes on had apparently put bounties on them and they were busy capturing or killing each other.
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I... yeah, that tracks. Greed and stupidity go so well together!

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As the emperor came to the same realization as Harry had and wasted time planning a gargantuan fleet action to retrieve what he needed rather than the surgical strike on a prostrate world Garm had executed Jedi sped to their brothers and sisters with stones and aid. Those Jedi then sped to the aid of others and the Jedi Order shook itself from its near defeat and rose from the knee it had been forced to.
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Very cool montage at the end. Is this the end of 'Part I' or something?
Wanderer chapter 5 . 11/24
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Aayla followed him, seeing some things that she was sure were very personal. Harry named the students, professors and beings they met in the halls and told her their stories. Unfortunately, they all ended "They were killed at such and such on so and so date."

She looked at him for a moment "Harry why are they here?"

Harry smiled "I gave them access to all my power. In here they're all as powerful as I am, and here they live forever. They are my defenses."
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... stunning. Brilliantly practical, but emotionally stunning.

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They stepped out after dressing, nearly into Shaak and Maris. Both grinning like crazy people. Aayla laughed "The door was open Just come in." Harry face palmed.

Bail, Breha and Yoda watched them from a balcony. Bail asked "So was your meditation helpful?"
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It seems like this is missing both a transition paragraph about them exercising, and a scene change indicator. There's a few of these, tho this was the most jarring of them thus far.

Minor confusions aside, whoooboy, this is a lot of fun!
Wanderer chapter 4 . 11/24
So Much To Learn! :D
Wanderer chapter 3 . 11/24
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For the first time ever, Harry actually felt what he thought was the timeline splitting, or shifting, or something. The other line didn't end, it spun or wandered off in a new direction. Close at first then diverging wider and wider. He could also feel Luna smiling. She did that sometimes at home when major events occurred. She frowned too sometimes, and last time that frown had meant demons, which was not so good.

...then

He woke to her crying later and felt some pain and betrayal but nothing like it had been before. Just barely an echo. He sighed and pulled her to him.
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Excellent.

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She laughed and pushed him in the bed crawled in behind him and snuggled in as he lay stiffly. She was asleep nearly immediately.

Harry lay awake for a while contemplating how the women in his life just took over. This one wasn't even in his life. And she was blue!
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LOL!

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Luna smiled and knew things would get better. Then she frowned and took the book from Hermione and took her to bed. It was going to take a little time but that meant they had time to beat this plane into shape. Also she could plant some seeds. Oh seeds! They could have four, no five children apiece for their friends who had died! They had healers, they were all healthy, they could carry five to term reasonably safely. She paused and looked at the lines cleaning themselves up. Hmmm yes this could work out fine. She would have to go back and make the changes in the line s she had written down.
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First of all, FIVE!? All of them having Quintuplets?! Harry's going to faint lol
Second, this was really trippy, but not... 'out there'?
It's fun, so... NEXT! :)
Wanderer chapter 2 . 11/24
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To do all that he was probably going to have to kill a few of these evil bastards, enough so that the others learned to leave him the fuck alone. No sweat. Same song different 'verse, universe in this case. He laughed at himself over that. Fuck the girls were going to kill him.
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Heh, fun stuff!

Looking forward to your take on Barriss, and how you'll 'save' the other two mentioned in tags from Order 66
Wanderer chapter 1 . 11/24
A very detailed, and very complex, background.
Given the size of the story, I'm guessing that Harry will need all of those 'toys' and all of that experience, and yet he'll still have to get 'mind healing' or some such from Yoda :)
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