Hiya,
Just read this and wanted to tell you how much I loved it. Perfect Tommy is my favourite character from the Cavaliers, but I get a little tired at the way he's written in such a one-dimensional way in so many stories. Your story was a revelation to me and I truly enjoyed it. Many thanks, and I hope you keep writing!

I've always pondered the diverse pasts of the Hong Kong Cavaliers and wondered what shaped them into the men and women they became. This story gives us some insight into a rather enigmatic character. There were a few problems with the mechanics of your writing, but the ideas you express are very good. They have the potential to be very powerful.

I liked this piece a lot, thanks for writing it.

Goose

Man, oh, man, Chronicler, ol' gal, you can really write sometimes.

Gives us all a deeper, real-person view of our cute guys.

Nicki Knight

I really liked this story. It gives great depth to characters whom we have really just met. thanks for your good work