|Reviews for Sunset Over the Bay|
| LittleMermade chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
When I saw that this story had no reviews, I considered writing one quickly. The story was written in an interesting way and you have clearly thought this through. Since it is an alternate timeline you probably are aiming for them to be a little out of character. Your Lightning is realistic to me and I am okay with your Noel (although I doubt he would leave Serah as his only family behind like this). Your Serah is well written until the very end of the One-ShotI don't see such a positive and loving woman like Serah commit suicide under any circumstances. But stillwell done.