Reviews for The Price of Betrayal
dharani.das86 chapter 1 . 10/8
Great work. Thank you for sharing it
Smargden chapter 1 . 9/11
I liked to read your story
Thank you
D.Mentor chapter 1 . 9/9
A great story, thank you for writing.
Buckwert chapter 1 . 9/6
Nice little story. You should finish it properly. There is no way Draco wouldn't screw that up
jabarber69 chapter 1 . 8/26
WoW...Great the parlay biy and of course the 45!
gphoenix51 chapter 1 . 8/23
I always enjoy a good "Everyone betrays Harry and Hermione, so they fuck up everyone else's shit". Good job. Might be a cliche, but that's just what makes it so fun and enjoyable.
dennisud chapter 1 . 8/17
Well done and ironic enough to make it exciting.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/17
Interesting, intriguing idea! He should have asked for Remus and Tonks lives though and her parents.
neweldi chapter 1 . 8/17
Thanks, I like it :-)
Rebmul chapter 1 . 8/8
I wonder how Britain is doing
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6
It's ok but could have been great it you weren't so heavy handed with cliches. Example: Hermione is injured and dying. Dobby needs to be a Potter elf to get help, but of course Harry takes time out to negotiate that Dobby take paid time off. Do you not see how retarded that is in a life or death emergency?
katmom chapter 1 . 6/19
Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7
love this story. So much fun to read,
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
This was a great read! Can't say I was expecting the gun, but I loved the results (no matter how disturbing that makes me, LOL). Thank you for your hard work and sharing your story with us.
Slytherin's Pimp chapter 1 . 5/7
I like it but would have liked to know what happened back in the Wizard community
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