Reviews for The Price of Betrayal |
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SoulofHarmony chapter 2 . 2/25/2021 I want to salute you! I love this fanfic! If you ever want to collab pm me! You are a great writer! Keep writing! |
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/21/2021 I love it. I especially love how Harry shot the b'ds :D |
Spade Zi chapter 2 . 9/28/2020 Just a Spade casually dropping by ️ |
Millie072 chapter 1 . 9/2/2020 It wuld have been interesting to see how long it took the wizengamot to declare Harry a wanted criminal. Molly's reaction to the death of her two youngest is right up there also. Once Tom eliminated Bella & some of his other mad dogs, he might make a decent ruler. His original ideas before the Potters were not that bad. There are several other questions that could be asked but they aren't necessary. A superb story that ended perfectly. Thanks |
ak chapter 2 . 8/13/2020 bonne fic! |
Charlee56 chapter 2 . 7/31/2020 An excellent one shot! Very well and concisely done! |
stevem1 chapter 1 . 7/29/2020 This is a good short. Very practical. In a lot of ways the prophecy is garbage and could equally apply to Dumbledore. |
Fuck Names chapter 1 . 6/1/2020 Good story! |
guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2020 Beautifully plotted! Some dialogue could be improved, but great work! for a first. All the apparent deviations from canon were quite plausible, and the ingenious plot device of HP's using non-magical means of killing was one I've found in only one other fic (though can't remember name of auth or fic). I'm rather surprised no other auths have thought of it, especially since HP was raised Muggle, but it too is entirely plausible. |
Rosa Ramirez chapter 1 . 5/2/2020 It's a wonderful first chapter I would like is the story was continued. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2020 It was a good first chapter and I wou |
Lora chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 How very very enjoyable. |
Edocsiru chapter 1 . 6/3/2019 It's prophecy and prophecies for the noun. Prophesy is the verb, as in 'She prophesies your future, but you don't believe in prophecy' |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2019 I really like this fic. As I was reading it, I realized that I had, in fact, read it before, but thankfully I have a CRS memory and had therefore forgotten the main parts so I was able to enjoy it again! (Go me!) In a way I wish Ron, Ginny, and Albus' suffering wasn't so...short-lived, but the point being "a quick way for Harry and Hermione to get on with getting on with their new life", I can see it. I like the thought put into this story and the reasoning behind the actions that were taken. Very nicely done! |
MoriganaMarie chapter 2 . 3/19/2019 I seriously loved this! I am really wanting more! I am now going to read as much of your stories as I can. |