|Reviews for Arcane Chaos|
| Lucius Walker chapter 56 . 1/15
An OP womanizer pretty much dominates the Percy Jackson world, sticking it to the gods that deserve it.
Love it. Can't wait for me.
(The fact that the OC does have to earn the powers does help balance things out, btw)
| Ricee chapter 54 . 12/12/2022
why is he having problems with teleportation? just run super fast there, and open a portal to the old location
| Ricee chapter 51 . 12/12/2022
the fuck was he doing with that bomb? just yeet it into a pocket dimension or mirror dimension
| Ricee chapter 45 . 12/11/2022
why do all these Shinto demigods have American names?
| Ricee chapter 35 . 12/11/2022
you yoinked Gon's jajaken? damn
| Ricee chapter 32 . 12/11/2022
of course, a rune to give him a strong sex drive. how... unique. not. terrible idea.
| Ricee chapter 31 . 12/11/2022
not telling people that she's a traitor can only go badly. even if he just told chairon, and had him keep a close eye on her. makes it seem like he's siding with her, keeping her secret
| Ricee chapter 29 . 12/11/2022
the fuck? what's wrong with the author? "I don't care what you have to saystops himself from killing him to hear what he has to say*. that's just bad writing
| Evan chapter 54 . 11/25/2022
| Acomodos chapter 41 . 11/18/2022
DO NOT READ. Honestly one of the worst books i’ve ever read. Markus is abusive, manipulative, and cruel. Simply breaking peoples bones for disagreeing with him or arguing. How the hell do you expect to put Zoe in the harem after he has abused her both mentally and physically. He is exactly what she and the hunters hate in men. If this is your idea of a good man, I question your IRL sanity.
| Palletking2001 chapter 33 . 10/12/2022
If this is true, then why did before reincarnation, Markus was said as heretic?
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/26/2022
Gods make this story instant garbage
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/26/2022
| Invictus602 chapter 25 . 8/19/2022
Ugh this a boring fic with it being unrealistic as hell. This oc is homeless for 7years since he was 5 and is 12 survived on the streets and somehow knows knowledge about anime stuff things you wouldn’t even know about if you’re homeless. On top of that he acts like he’s over 18 when’s he’s still a kid. This entire story just follows canon with extra mc that’s not even likable. I had high hopes for this and even pushed through hoping to get to something good with this fic but nope just disappointment
| Tony McNucklz chapter 5 . 8/3/2022
He knows he's a son of Poseidon and just... doesn't do anything? doesn't get curious about the cabin just for him (before percy is outed as well)? Can't guess that maybe the sword isn't great for him because a spear or trident may be natural if godly parents affect your preferred weapons? He already should know godly parents may be the reason he's shit with archery.
Jesus, how big and heavy is the bronze shield that a demigod son of poseidon that's been fighting monsters with his bare hands for years can barely lift it? is it a massive tower monstrosity or something?
Armor isn't heavy. That's pop culture bullshit. Greek hoplite-esque armor would be almost nothing, especially on a freaking demigod.
Bowling balls average at 12-14lbs and can be as light as 8 lbs, dufuq is all this bitching about a damn shield?
Bored. This feels like a canon retelling with an extra son of poseidon as a tagalong that just adds some extra lines, and is even a better fighter but still seems like he's second banana to the real chosen one for no apparent reason. Even with Markus there, just as much a son of poseidon, it's still blatantly obvious who the main character is between the two. Percival the hapless clueless dolt that lacks basic deduction skills even gets listed first, as if Markus is an after thought.