Great story, very well done! Amazing twists that just make you keep reading.

Glossaryck and Sol saw me in the bathroom... if anyones judging I know half of you are in the sane boat.

That was amazing journey! This was a wonderful one! Honestly I didn’t know if I was going to love it when I first started but I just fell for it. It was wonderful. Oh and loved all references!

Okay first of all I wanted to see the fight, second of all I cried tears of laughter at the anchorman reference. Gold

I love river, the mans a national treasure truly

I fuckingg love this

I have read the story, and it's just a masterpiece. AMAZING BRILLIANT, WISH THERE ARE MORE

You did an amazing job here and I totally loved this story from beginning to end!

You mentioned that Jackie gave birth for a third time yet, she only had 2 kids. Was it a stillborn? I kept having to recount the kids when it stated that Marco was a father of 9 instead of 10(including the twins inside Hekapoo).

I just loved sol's reaction to school

Great fanfiction, good luck in future projects.

Glossaryck: now, i’m not one for speeches-
Star (coughBS!

My favorite line ever!

I’m on chapter 16, and i have to say i am a little impressed. There are a few grammar mistakes which is a little off putting, but they do a good job capturing the character’s personalities.
Star: so i got knocked up, big deal. I’ve done worst things.
pony head: name one
Star: i have done worst things...in theory.

pretty well written and funny

Nice ficc