Reviews for Yet Another Dance at Death's border |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! I hope you're doing great! I just finished reading your story Yet Another Dance at Death's border, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share! I'm a digital artist open for commissions and have a few spots available. I work on various types of artwork, my rates are reasonable, and I always deliver high-quality pieces. If you're interested, let’s discuss it further! You can reach me here: - Discord: baran59354 - DeviantArt: baran59354 - Twitter: ZoyeZest - Instagram: baran59354 Looking forward to hearing from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been a while since I read this so I came back. It's just as I remembered. It might be dead but I miss it. |
![]() ![]() Another asshole trying to jack up his word count with giant author notes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey reding through this fic again and just had the thought of with the luner eclipse it would be awesome idea with John's eyes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish this would be updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish someone could continue thisnew chapter plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn… too bad this wont be continued, was actually liking it alot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely stuff |
![]() ![]() Hope you are doing well in life! THANK YOU! For this gem. I don't know you, but I have read your work and I hope you gain happiness wherever you are. |
![]() ![]() This was a really good read can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh. I dislike these deus-ex-machina moments being used. Proper planning and thinking is much more admirable than a gimmick acting at the right moment unexpectedly. Otherwise it implies luck, fate or destiny matters more than conscious choice. Him choosing to escape with rational logic, or even fighting with a slim chance to make a difference at least while still losing in the end would've been more acceptable. Honestly, if the sword can talk then it should've just talked earlier so they can get to know and plan how to grow with each other. This on the other hand was just lame. Such a pity too, since the rest of the chapter was so good. Oh well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont understand why you diss the story and author he is one of the most talented authors i have ever seen. |
![]() ![]() yea. failure. Another one to the trash pile |
![]() ![]() last few chapters have just been a bunch of hot air, when you take into account that it was dropped like so many other fics, makes the fic overall trash. If you're gonna be detailed and wordy then the story should match. since the story is dropped so soon after this it's obviously a failure |