Reviews for The First Pleasure
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Awesome!
Freddie23 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Great story.
Freddie23
TinaMaki chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
hot
BlackDarknessFanfics chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
very very good, nice job!
i like it! :D
I'm not a writer anymore chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
That was literally one of the best fics I've ever read! Please write a second chapter, that was indredible!
RDJASS chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Awesome! :D
miyoko chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
oh...my...god...

THAT WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!

Seriously, I could picture every little detail in my head as I was reading this. Keep it up! :)
A Word or Two Less chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Oh. My. Gosh. I. Cant's. Breathe... I am speechless... This was brilliant, I loved every second of it!
LovelySnakes chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I really enjoyed this and I am looking forward to reading more of your work
Hija-Jiyangi chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
*eyetwitch* That... was... amazing. Yaoi Lord of the Rings your awesome writing ABSOLUTE HEAVEN! You have made me one happy fangirl. Keep up the good work.
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
hm that was rather hot actually and even considering i'm not a big Ara/Lego fan. So, why did i even read this, u know, not sure? It was good though.
Verticalness chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
that was lovely. very well done. (:
Bethuviel chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
I'm not generally not into this sort of thing but curiosity got the better of me. Sexy. Yeah, it was sexy.
Carazon chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Aww that was so cute xD I loved it nice work!
Duncan chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Damn. *fans self* Anyway, *clears throat* that was certainly an excellent piece of prose. *fans more furiously* You are really very good- you got the emotion and feelings behind the story so well. It felt very real- so many people make thier stories too fluffy or sacchirine. One of the best things I've read in a long time. Well, I'm off to take a cold shower. Awesome, really wow.

-Duncan
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