|Reviews for Marriage Made in Heaven|
| shamrocks51 chapter 22 . 9/3/2012
| Yorushike chapter 22 . 5/24/2012
absolutely amazing story. Just wow. love it :). In the very beginning it feels a tiny bit rushed, that they have sex on the first night, but WHO CARES? They are simply ADORABLE together :). The ending just makes me feel all warm and fluffy and I really like Lexi's charakter.
| takerfan925 chapter 22 . 11/23/2010
Perfect! now I can go to bed you.
| takerfan925 chapter 21 . 11/23/2010
So what is in the box? My curiousity is standing on end.
| takerfan925 chapter 20 . 11/23/2010
I sense trouble here,one she;s had an accident an is lying hurtsomewhere or goodness knows what. He'll be steamed about his "baby" and that Lexi might be having an abortion as is just too suspicious for his own good,but some folks have messed up his head that way. I know I need to go to bed,but I can't til I know Lexi is okay and the baby,too.
| takerfan925 chapter 19 . 11/23/2010
Jamison is gonna learn assuming he lives that you don't mess with what belongs to Taker really fast. An if he'll just be a little patient with her she'll tell him,everything.
| takerfan925 chapter 18 . 11/23/2010
If he doesn't recognize the love she has for him then I don't know what we're gonna do with him,she didn't tell him b/c she wants to surprise him,men can be so dense sometimes.
| takerfan925 chapter 17 . 11/23/2010
He best tell her the reason,he tells her he's going off an she's gonna think its to go see some bimbo an that will kill trust me no piece of paper no matter what it says will tear her away from her child/children,don't care if he is the Deadman,the Phenom,mthe American Bad Ass,she won't walk away from her child.
| takerfan925 chapter 16 . 11/23/2010
Onliest way he can hurt her is to walk away from her for good an I don't think he's that dumb,a little slow on the realiziation,maybe,but not dumb.
| takerfan925 chapter 15 . 11/23/2010
You see you do something nice for her an it comes back like 1, thanks him in away she knows will please him an she enjoys it too. If I just have to make atip for improvement,I would say spelling,tho' I can figure out what you're trying to say or get at,some body else might not. I think I'm so used to you,that's its no real problem for me. Suggestion have you thought of using DWTS as a backdrop,the OC could be a Pro Dancer or just a fan in the audience.I mean we have Divas aplenty an the same for Superstars,but I'll leave it up to with it.
| takerfan925 chapter 14 . 11/23/2010
She doesn't need the money,but this is good for her self-esteem an Mr. Grump will just have to learn to deal with it.
| takerfan925 chapter 13 . 11/23/2010
Sweet Lexi expects only what Mark wants to give her an she's thankful and grateful for 's gonna wind up wantin' to give her the world,you just wait an see. Why am I telling you this you wrote the story,lol.
| takerfan925 chapter 12 . 11/23/2010
He can tell himself that til roosters speak pig latin anpigs take up bowling,for goodness sakes,but he's gone,I know it ,you know it,an everybody else knows it.
| takerfan925 chapter 11 . 11/23/2010
Taking him lunch was a sweet ,thoughtful gesture,just what my littke lexi should have done. Where is Beau? She's part of his pack now an he needs to defend wait til Mark sees what that did to her,if he don't kill him,I will be surprised.
| takerfan925 chapter 10 . 11/23/2010
He's hooked,his brain just doesn't realize it its cute to see him so stunned when she does something unexpected for wants an obedient wife an he got one just not how he expected her to be.