I personally do not mind long chapters. In fact I like a larger word count. I also do not see the need to cram as much of Warhammer into ASOIAF as possible. I enjoyed the premise of the Empire being in Westeros and how the various factions deal with them. Bringing in more of the Old World seems to me like Warhammer on a new map. It just seems like with more and more Warhammer factions being brought in it would sideline the ASOIAF side of the crossover. But if that's the direction you want to take the story, that's your prerogative as the author. I will still read it cause quality stories are rare. Anyway my long meandering review aside. Great chapter and thanks for updating.

It is my opinion that each well put detail adds to the story. I highly urge you to not take criticism about the length of chapters or detail, too seriously. Also one advice would be; if you are going to introduce more to the story, be careful not to create too many tangent storylines and deviate from the initial plan in your mind. Otherwise the storylines might never end or go in circles, and then the previous criticism would apply. I would recommend using arcs to keep the story focused since this looks to be a massive and glorious undertaking! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for the hard work!

Hey thanks for updating. Nice see some vermintide characters.

Glad for the update! Looking forward to more!

This just made my day

Take all the time you need to update man, life happens and I hope it starts improving.

I've really enjoyed this story and I can't help but look forward to what you plan on doing with it.

This just made my day

To hell what people think of your writing style! No one could do better than you mate! Hope for more chapters soon and for that Skyrim crossover too!

I’m honestly fine with your pace, keep going!

YEAH you'r Back ! damn i missed you :)
So if i wanted to resume this chapter : the Team of Vermintide is back at last ( minus lady Archer but wr know she is coming back), that damn griffon is the best damn mount ever ( fuck the Imperial Dragon), the Empire as now a fleet and more mens( and more wizards, dwarfs, weapons , civi and etc)

The old world is fucked but it's seems peoples are still fighting in a last houra... Does this mean we are going to seem some Asur, Drukari, Bretonians and Dwarfs from the Karak Ankor ? Norca would be "good" for the Free folk and should make them a True threat

Ps: i like big chapter so i don't really mind but if you think you can do better, by all mean go for it ! I will still be here waiting for the sweet, sweet update
About Karl being Lileath's mipping Boy... Does that mean Sigmar is back and not really happy about the bitch stealing HIS Champion ?

I almost choked when I saw the notifications! It's really great to see you're back and about writing this story again. Honestly? You could've done better but we're all just flawed human beings so it is understandable that you thought you have erred. But the way the story has been built up till now, I say it's fine in my opinion. It is admittedly a little rushed but you have molded this world to the optimal best you can provide for this. And as long as you simply care about this story, I'm quite happy with whatever you decide to do and wait for an update. I'd rather have a late update than an incomplete and incoherent mess. If you plan to revise or reboot parts of this or fully, I highly advice you to do so since you know what is best for this story and it would be terrible if you lock yourself in a plot you never wanted or intended in the first place. With that in mind, let me bid you a nice day and I hope to see you again with a new chapter soon.

Where is Kerilian? I hope you dont axe her. I want the Five reunited again.

For a moment there I had no idea what popped in my notifications, but bless Sigmar for this blessing!

hope you continue

rip?