I humbly request that this story is continued soon Mein Kaiser!

You seem way too harsh on yourself. You said your pacing was bad previously, which I disagree with since I'm quite enjoying this part of the story and don't mind that it is taking some time to go south of the Wall. It's a shame you don't seem to be updating these days because I quite like your writing and your grasp on the lore. The fact I've been playing a ton of Vermintide and TW: Warhammer lately makes all the references that much more pleasing.

Hey Georgiy how’s it going? Is the author still writing the story and if so where can I find it? Also any plans to upload some more? Hope to hear from you. Cheers

By the old gods and the new, this is a great story. Having just come off a massive Total Warhammer II binge, this story was a great follow up. Cheers mate!

The Watch is in danger.

I want a griffin too.

Poor Gared.

I love Ygritte.

Who is Mance Rayder?

This story is very good so far! Please update! I really like it!

MORE PLEASE! I need this! In quarantine, this is a God sent gift...lol...PLS dear author!

This story is GREAT! Pls update! I really like this! I dont think the pacing is bad...i enjoyed it very much! PLS UPDATE! I have been looking for a story like this for years now!

So.. 150k words and the story is at its end for now. I don't really know what to say, to be honest. It feels like it has barely begun. It's like you've been stuck in this stage of preparing for the story to begin, of introducing new characters and showing them off and of setting up the plot, but without actually progressing in any real way. After 150k words, that's honestly just unacceptable.

You spend so much time on what is essentially filler that your story will reach unimaginable lengths if it's ever going to proceed and eventually finish in a proper way. I can't say I really understand your plan here.

Again, your writing is quite decent, but you have serious issues when it comes to actually telling a story.

This is shaping up to be a 2million word story with the pace you're going at. What are you doing?

You have nice technical writing skills, but the story is pretty slow so far. While getting to know the new characters is important, it really feels a bit too far already. Move the story along.