hope for an updaye

I love this story. The action scenes, the character interactions, and your OC's, are all of great quality. I'm not sure about the plot, but that's only because I haven't seen enough to get a good grasp of it. Im not sure what Lileath's motivations would be in Westoros, but I can attribute that to be"mortals not understanding the will of gods." However, didn't Lileath say she would return Franz and his army to the exact point and time as when she took them? If time is still passing in the old world, as the staggered arrival of more people in Westeros and their news would suggest, then how much has she lied to Franz? I like how you made chaos more insidious (if I'm reading the hints correctly).
Personally, I don't mind the long chapters. I get where people are coming from, but the length with the quality of writing just makes me think you're passionate about the story. I think this could easily be a novel if it was not a fanfiction crossover. I don't think you should try to limit the length if it comes at the expense of the chapter quality. If you feel that you should do something, if anything, break a chapter at a POV switch or scene break and then continue to write as you have.

This is strange. Did this chapter get revised and more content added? This all seems new!

To be honest with you, i am for one completely O.K with setting up Karl Franz's harem, he deserve it far more than some other characters that FF seems to have a hard on. On another topic this is without a doubt the best warhammer fantasy fanfic there is,hell one of the best fanfic i've read, love how you choose Karl Franz as one of the main POV character. Getting sick of OC as the MC.

To be honest witb

I can’t wait for Saltzpyre to be unleashed upon the seven kingdoms.
It’s going to be glorious.

this is a goos storie, please update soon.

Suggestion make the ogre high elf the dwarf and bretonnia be in your story make them all as allies

Suggestion make some ogre tribe appeared and allied with the imperial it would be cool

That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.

We need some good Kislev bears in here.

PLS UPDATE! THIS IS SIMPLY TOO GOOD!

Bro please update soon

I have to say you have done a wonderful job writting this story! The characters are all well written and interactions are believable with no lore errors that arn't promptly explained. This is the perfect read for sickdays like it's been for me or long car rides. I don't know why other readers are complaining about the pacing considering it fits what you are trying to tell, I've seen others try to be quick and it only results in 3k word chapters, badly written dialouge, and curbstomping to a ridiculous degree.

I did wonder a few things while reading such as why the army didn't have camp followers which would include blacksmiths, ferriers, fletchers, and various regular people which includes wifes, servants, hawkers, and falconers. It just seems like it would of made things easier to have such things. I was also wondering why the dwarfs haven't been setting up camp in those caves nearby the settlement that you described when they first arrived, it's not necessary but the thought came to mind when I read the description.

My final question is how long has it been since they arrived in Westros as you don't provide solid timespans, I know Todbringers daughter mentioned years but considering it's across realities and Lileth claimed to be able to transport people through time things are uncertain.

I realy like the story so far i hope it continue