Reviews for Intruder
R Calway chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
Ah such a pleasant story. Alienmouse. Mouse Eds pet. It certainly is a different approach to U.F.O. and refreshing as a result. Good to see Straker has a pet for a while even a Tiny mouse. :-)
TnJAGAz chapter 1 . 7/18/2018
Never thought of a mouse as an alien, but it works!

Loved the interplay between Ed and Alec about 'his' death.

Nicely done!
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
This is soooo...cute! I really liked Max, who knew mice were aliens? It was good to see Alex again. Thanks for posting.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
Completely unexpected but ahh so lovely.
Nans chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
What an excellent tale.
I loved the insights you brought out about Straker.
Loved the twist!
Well done.