Reviews for Lori's Journals
MrSpartan92 chapter 2 . 4/13/2019
It’s good so far. More please!
kittyspawn chapter 2 . 1/24/2018
Please write more?!
Ringcaat chapter 2 . 11/2/2017
Longest Night is the Christmas analogue, not the Halloween analogue! The game even mentions Halloween by name once or twice.

Silly Lori! And silly author, not giving us the thing Lori will remember forever. Wouldn't that have been a punchier chapter ending?
Ringcaat chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
I like journal entry fiction, and it's nice to get a glimpse into Lori M.'s head. Thanks for writing this. Weird that she writes out her *huffs*! I like how you worked in Lori being the vandal.
TRANQUIL BUNNY chapter 1 . 9/8/2017
Oh my thank you for the feedback, i appre it soo much, i usually just write tiny spinoffs and stuff, because its fun, i didn't think others would read what i wrote, i am happy.

I will start again soon
thearisoner chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Kinda interesting, my dude! I'd like to see more from Lori M's point of view. Lori's an interesting character to say the least.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
When next part will be out? So cool fanfic
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
Be careful, mate. Mae is 20 and Lori is barely 15. Dude. Getting creepy.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
love the story cant wait for more love the shipping of these two
Leafera chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
This is adorable, I love this already like Hhh this was really nice to read! I can't wait to see more of it
TwistBone chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
This is nice, I really enjoyed the interactions between Mae and Lori in the game and it's cool to see them from Lori's side
PixelPolarity chapter 1 . 3/24/2017

This is cute

But shes 15 dude

Mae's 20


Be careful

The cops are gonna find ya

Jk tho

Good job

I await more my dude