Reviews for Ocean Stars Falling
PrimalWhiteStar chapter 27 . 9/18/2023
Thanks for the Great Chapter and Story
acowles02 chapter 1 . 9/7/2023
Lol nom issue
acowles02 chapter 1 . 9/7/2023
Please dont tell me all the spoken words are in italics
realfan16 chapter 14 . 9/6/2023
Overall Epic chap. Characterization was ayt.
realfan16 chapter 12 . 9/2/2023
finally another POV. It's refreshing to see another's thought sequence for once
Riku Uzumaki chapter 27 . 7/29/2023
Ah, I see. So Roshi and Son Goku have been actively fighting off Kaguya/Kannon's presence in their minds from the start due to their knowledge of spiritual matters while everyone else was too confused about the voice and their situation to even get a clue as to what was going on and just decided to make the best of their situations. This puts Roshi and Son Goku in the perfect position to become the MVPs of this battle against Kaguya/Kannon since they have established themselves as outside her immediate grasp and can potentially destroy her body while her mind is distracted by the other Tailed Beasts and Jinchurriki.
Wabbayack22 chapter 2 . 7/29/2023
Isnt she a konoha ninja? Youd think they would have experience dropping from high heights to the ground. I actually haven’t read the breath story this character comes from since it hasnt been updated since 2019 but it kinda seems like kei is like… not main character energy at all. Like sakura could definitely take her place and do it better. Probably a quick judgement without a ton of info backing it but Kei seems kinda…. Lackluster?
WindbornesWord chapter 27 . 7/28/2023
Yeah Imu is a complete unknown, still good to see the Beast Pirates get beat up. Fuck those guys.
Riku Uzumaki chapter 26 . 7/26/2023
Oh good, you're back, and it looks like Kaguya is finally making her move. Looks like we finally have an idea as to why it took so long for Son Goku to finally show up. He probably had an idea as to what was happening and deliberately kept his connection with the other Biju as loose as possible so as to avoid getting caught in the trap set for them.
WindbornesWord chapter 26 . 7/25/2023
Figures that the sole Sage would know what the hell is going on. Dammit Goku.
Silverwingzz chapter 11 . 4/19/2023
The one issue I can see is the whole speed of the biju thing. They should’ve easily been able to catch up but you probably didn’t let them for plot. The other thing is that they should’ve shot a biju bomb at the ship after they found out ace wasn’t on it.
Silverwingzz chapter 10 . 4/19/2023
Kei is really starting to piss me off with how she’s acting.
WindbornesWord chapter 25 . 12/4/2022
I hope this Fic gets updated soonish. And that this ends up actually canon to CYB.
khjd chapter 1 . 9/15/2022
Have yet to read the chapter but by god I just had the biggest dopamine hit of my life when I discovered this

Already know its probably going to be awesome :)
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 25 . 3/5/2022
ok. love all of this and hope that the surprise is One piece is actually in the same world as anruto? its just like, a far away continent or something.
\you totes made me ship Ace and Yugito in this one so good job. go lady Cat lady! and also the hush pirate kings kid I was borna and raised as a literally weapon sunshine boy and HA.

also Kei!

and Kushina kicking some ASS.

poor everyone else, the Bijju are really just a mite to big of a category on their own? especially with all the other corresponding people. still nice to see evil be outnumbered! and yeah DOWn with the revolutionary!

also question, Kaidou fun times... alas.
still! dope.
Kushina chains versus mastery string is cool. Law deserves his im gonna kill you fight but hey, someone taking him down is good.
and down with the dang nobels! down with em all!
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